[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2009 8:21:43 PM Title: Picking up the Pieces
I LOVE IT!!! MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2009 7:28:47 PM Title: Picking up the Pieces
i love this story, please continue.
Date: 21 Feb 2009 8:08:57 PM Title: Closure
please continue, i love this story A LOT.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2009 10:55:58 PM Title: Closure
Yay! Thank you for updating! Do it again soon PLEASE!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2009 8:40:30 PM Title: Blood
I really like this story so far. Please update soon. I would like to read her reaction to Cat-nip. Like that one anime tv ep when the sister of the thunder brothers set the trap of Cat-nip for Kirara. I hope you know the ep Im talking about. That would be a great scene to read to have Kagome (of course Kirara joining her) in the bliss of cat-nip.
Thats just an ideal pop to my head when I was reading this. Over all I really enjoy reading this story. You wrote it so well with nice balance of humor, action, romance and etc.
Are you going to add an lemon scene later? or are you just write right before that scene then jump to the "morning after" part? yeah yeah I know Im bening an pervert. But I just have to ask. I will still read and keep an eye out for the next update.
thanks,
Suniko
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review. Of course I know what episode you're talking about! It's the one where Soten (I think that's her name) and Shippo have a duel. Someone already emailed me about putting in a cat-nip scene, but I have no definite plans to do one at the moment. If an opportunity comes along later, and the circumstances are right, I will do it. It probably would be pretty funny to see.
I'm glad you mentioned my balancing of many different elements. That's what I'm going for. And yes, this story will have a lemon. Actually, I'm planning several, so you'll get more than just the "first time lemon" that I put in my other stories. I'm looking forward to the chance to expand my hentai horizons. I love reading a good lemon, and writing them is pretty cool too. There's nothing wrong with being a little hentai!
Thanks again for the review,
King Baka
Date: 04 Feb 2009 10:39:38 AM Title: Old Habits
please continue. i love this story and i want to know what happens to shippo
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2009 1:18:16 AM Title: Pulse
loving the story
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2009 10:55:27 PM Title: Pulse
Yay! I am so happy you updated! I really like this story! I enjoy reading it, every update! Keep up the good work!
Date: 09 Jan 2009 10:44:58 AM Title: Reminisces
i loved the latest chapter. please continue when you get the chance.
Date: 25 Dec 2008 10:24:02 PM Title: Introspectives
please continue.
Date: 23 Dec 2008 12:00:05 PM Title: Introspectives
good chapter. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2008 9:13:05 AM Title: Out in the Open
i love kagome as a hanyou.inuyasha is finally getting his act together too!im going to be sad when this story ends.1 question though.when kags and sango are in the spring she says that he should be glad she didnt osuwari him more then once.since she said the word to sango shouldnt we have heard a thump from the campsite?
Author's Response: Thanks for bringing this to my attention. It seems like no matter how carefully I proofread, small errors manage to slip through the cracks. This one has been fixed.
Date: 17 Dec 2008 8:39:05 AM Title: Out in the Open
aww. they finally tel how much they like each other. i love it. continue when you get the chance please:)
Date: 11 Dec 2008 9:14:10 PM Title: A New Direction
i like this chapter please update soon
Date: 11 Dec 2008 6:00:43 PM Title: A New Direction
yay:D i love the new chapter. please write more when you get the chance.
Date: 08 Dec 2008 6:19:29 PM Title: Role Reversal
i loved it. please continue. i would like to see what happens next.
Date: 07 Dec 2008 11:22:02 AM Title: Role Reversal
Good as always keep it up cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 02 Dec 2008 11:37:27 AM Title: A Nose for Trouble
I love this story please update soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2008 11:10:46 AM Title: A Nose for Trouble
So the two that just showed up were the cat guys adopted siblings this should be good!
and in response to your note at the end the ole saying changed up a bit
Those that can do those that can't flame....lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2008 12:17:07 AM Title: A Nose for Trouble
more, more, more please.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2008 10:56:59 PM Title: A Nose for Trouble
If you ever get flamed enough that it is overkill, then report it... but leave the flame up until I can view it and determine a fitting action. Sorry to hear about the flaming...been there too.
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InuYasha was quite polite in keeping the scent of her time of month under wraps... though I also could imagine him spouting off about it if he had the inkling to.
Author's Response:
The flame was on mediaminer.org. I haven't had any problems with this website. Like I said, it doesn't really bother me. I just don't like the thought of other people getting harrassed and intimidated like that.
And I believe there are certain things that even Inuyasha knows better than to open his mouth about. This would be one example.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2008 5:11:40 AM Title: Tests
I am thoroughly your story and can't wait for the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 5:16:13 AM Title: Tests
ummm question...... doesn't Kikyo still have the shards I didn't see where Kags got the bottle with them in it back?
Author's Response: Nope. Right after Kagome says "it's not in your hand..." Kikyou tosses the shards back to her. I'm not going to forget a detail like that, though I guess I could have made it more obvious.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 5:09:45 AM Title: Tests
Very nice portrayal... no explanation needed on her friends... real friends are always concerned, but not overly so.
I like the cat and water play. lol...and it was a nice little scene for InuYasha to get a peek...lol
I like the route of the pure soul. Just because she is youkai and a miko, does not mean she muddied her soul. She is still Kagome all the same... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. You're the only person consistently reviewing on this site, so I appreciate it.