It is a very rare IY/K story that grabs my interest. I enjoyed the interaction between them. Given his past, the background on being frightened of looking at a woman is not only entirely believable, but highly probable in a 'real' life setting.
It was sweet, and honest too. It is okay to look and to admire the beauty of the human body. No one should be made to feel like a pervert or a deviant for it.
Again, I enjoyed it. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. This was one of the hardest pieces I've written. When she won the kiriban, and made this request, I really had to think about how to fulfil her request. I have to admit, I really enjoyed writing it.
Thanks again for the review!