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Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2008 1:57:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

The general message and wording is pretty clear on her feelings. It is good, however.... there are some spelling mistakes if you carefully read through. I can help edit those if you miss them... that is if you wish?

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