Summary: This is a divergence from the manga. After Naraku is defeated, Kagura longs to be with Sesshomaru, but does not know how to approach him. Rin takes matters into her own hands, with the help of InuYasha and Kagome. This is a song fic.
Categories: Romance > Sesshoumaru/ Kagura, Romance
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Kagura, Rin, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2507 Read Count: 556
Member Since: 13 Jul 2014
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[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2008 Updated: 21 Sep 2008
Reviewer: ceecee Signed 
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1A New Beginning
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1A New Beginning
It's beautiful. Really beautiful. How you describe their emotions rocked mine. I almost thought that they'd ended up separating again lol.
Anyway, you were able to capture their characters and maintain it all through out the story. And when Kagura says, "Yes, My Lord" I felt like sobbing. Finally, she's free... :)
Summary: What if Sesshomaru was able to save Kagura with the tenseiga? Read this story and find out.....
Categories: Action/ Adventure, Romance
Characters: Kagura, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26625 Read Count: 32454
Categories: Action/ Adventure, Romance
Characters: Kagura, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26625 Read Count: 32454
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2011
Reviewer: ceecee Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I loved the way you portray their relationship. They were really in character and I commend your skills for that. I think that there are only few things that you need to improve. First is that writing in blocks of paragraph while having two-three people converse at the same time makes your readers confused. It would appear a lot more cleaner, organized and reader-friendly if you would separate the dialogues of different people. Like for an example, when Kagura says
"Leave me alone" (enter description of her emotions here)
--you put a space in between and place the other dialog below
"Submit, Kagura" (Description of Ses/emotions)
Second, Sesshomaru is not really fond of words so he basically doesn't say a lot of things when he talks. When he is asked he only replies "hmm" and most of the time he only stares at the person and nothing else. I would suggest that you don't make Ses too much of a chatty person.
Third and the last, I think that you did a good job in describing their emotions but as a reader, I find it a great deal for an author to describe his characters' emotionsemotionally haha.
All in all, I love your story even to the point of having me registered here in this site just to submit a review! hehe I see that it has been years since you last updated. I hope that somehow you'd find the time to finish this!
Au Revoir, Ceecee!