Wow I like it.  Maybe I just roleplay or something too much because this plot is very familiar, but not with the way you used it.  I like how those two guys were cruel to Kagome in the beginning so it's not just everyone meeting up and being friends.  Naraku is still what i'm unsure about....is he in character or not? I haven't read too many fics with modern day good Naraku so it's hard to figure it out, but all the dialouge his spoken seems really real to me and I can imagine the Naraku from the show saying it.  Anyway i'll just have to keep reading more to find out.  Thank you for providing this awesome fanfic ^_^