Penname: PitaBread [Contact] Real name: Rita
Member Since: 15 Sep 2007
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:

*PitaBread*

 ^_^ : Cheese, smut, kitties, the sun, Sesshoumaru, vampires, writing, SessKag, reading, shojou manga, dinosaurs, dragons, cars, and diet coke.  These things make a happy Riti.  (^w^)/

 >.< : Onions, spiders (but I don't kill them), Bush (the president, lol), people who claim they are writers but it looks like they never finished school, bad grammar, animal abusers, and people that hate (ie: homophobes, racists, sexists, etc...).  These things make for an unhappy Riti.  >:((

 

A little about my writing:

I am FAR from perfect.  I may not be the most exciting writer (I need to work on that), but I really try to have correct spelling and grammar.  Also (this is a big pet peeve of mine) - please - if you are going to correct me, make sure you are right.  I try to be as canon as possible (unless I'm writing AU), which means I use Japanese words and spellings.  I also stick to what I know of the MANGA, not the anime.  Anime is NOT canon in InuYasha.  Only the manga in canon, which means the movies aren't canon either.  The movies technically never "happened", because Rumiko-sensei didn't make those.  WAY too many times I have had girl ask me, "What about Ayame??"  Ayame doesn't exist.  It was a character that Sunrise made up to make the story more interesting.  ALSO - occasionally I contain spoilers.  I read the manga as it comes out, so if something is written in my story that seems off, it might be because you don't know about it yet, so don't blame me. 

 

I'm putting my disclaimer here:  Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, Kagome, Kouga, Kikyou, Naraku, Kagura, Sango, Miroku, Kirara, Kohaku, and Rin do not belong to me. They are (c) Takahashi Rumiko. If they did, I would be rich, and therefore could afford a subscription for this account. Plus: Why would I write fanfiction about my own characters? If I did, it would just be fiction. Duh.

All other characters including: Sayuri, Nikki, Jason, John, Trent, Matt, Joey, and Ian are (c) ME.
I make no profit from these stories and only write them for my own and my fans' pleasure.

 

Thanks, and enjoy!  -Pita

 


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Summary: -Complete- Waking up from a nightmare late one autumn night, Kagome discovers Inuyasha is missing, leaving her to embark on a harrowing journey of death and consumption that will fade the line between human and youkai.
Categories: Action/ Adventure
Characters: Kagome Higurashi, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34764 Read Count: 2014
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2009 Updated: 30 Sep 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Tracks in the Dust

Holy crap!  That was unexpected!  Oh, you're a tricky one, ladyb!  Well, damn.  It's late, but I won't be able to sleep unless I keep reading, so...

Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Hunger

Oooh, that is so disturbingly great!  I've only read one other chillingly dark Inuyasha-related fic, but the dark parts were mostly sexual.  So this is a nice change.  ^^

Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hidden Wounds

Heh, you come up with the best plots!  This is very interesting.  Besides the cover that I saw, are you going to do any artwork for this story?

Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Missing

I love a good thriller - the darker, the better.  I wish I had had the time to read this back when you first wrote it, but I've been so busy.  Now you've gotten me hooked!  Onward, then!

Summary: haiku for IYFF's contest
Categories: Action/ Adventure, Poetry > Haiku
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13 Read Count: 2061
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2009 Updated: 04 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, lillianruno!  I have banners for you for your haiku... please email me so I can give them to you!  inuyashaluvr_prettykitty@yahoo.com

Prelude to a Kiss by RebaJean Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: November Haiku challenge entry. Kagome and her lover embrace.
Categories: Poetry > Haiku
Characters: Kagome Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13 Read Count: 2491
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2009 Updated: 07 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's great!  Wonderful job!  My only question is: which category do you want to put it in?

Author's Response: Citrus or other romance, I guess. The identity of Kagome's partner is open to interpretation.

Summary:

Haiku Contest- November 2009- up for *Best Inu/Kag Romance

A Haiku about the way Kagome views Inuyasha. 


Categories: Poetry, Poetry > Haiku
Characters: Inu Yasha
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21 Read Count: 2354
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2009 Updated: 17 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2009 Title: Chapter 1: My Adonis

Great job!  Good luck! 

Mates by _rainstorm rikku_ Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Haiku Contest-November 2009- up for *Best Citrus/ *Best Sess/Kag

A Haiku about Sesshoumaru taking Kagome as his mate.


Categories: Poetry, Poetry > Haiku
Characters: Kagome Higurashi, Sesshoumaru
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23 Read Count: 159
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2009 Updated: 17 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mates

This is great!!  I'll enter you in the contest for both categories.  :]  Could you do me a favor and spread the word about the contest?  Thanks!

Gone by _rainstorm rikku_ Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

***Quarterly Haiku Contest Winner for Best Horror/Tradedy***

 

 A haiku about Inuyasha dying. 


Categories: Poetry > Haiku
Characters: Inu no Taishou
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17 Read Count: 48
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2009 Updated: 18 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Gone

This is great, but isn't 'closed' one syllable?  If I'm wrong, then I'm sorry, but otherwise, that means there's only 4 syllables in that last line...

Summary:

Haiku Contest- November 2009- up for *Best Comedy 

 A Haiku about Shippou pulling a prank on Inuyasha and the ending result.  


Categories: Poetry > Haiku
Characters: Inu Yasha, Kagome Higurashi, Shippo
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25 Read Count: 2007
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2009 Updated: 19 Nov 2009
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Kitsune Pranks

I'll delete this later, but if you'd like to fix it, the first and second lines both have too many syllables: the first has six, and the second has eight. 

Summary:

Haiku contest entries....primarily.

I may add to this from time to time in the future - haiku are highly addicting, after all. ^_^

 

 


Categories: Poetry, Poetry > Haiku
Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175 Read Count: 66361
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 01 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: SessKag

This is great, FT! 

They're addicting, no?  ^^

One by ladybattousai Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Lost and without direction, Sesshoumaru is the sole survivor of his kind in a time of glittering lights and monuments of steel and concrete, where he soon finds a purpose but from behind a mask.
Categories: Action/ Adventure
Characters: Kagome Higurashi, Kagome's Grandfather, Kagome's Mom, Sesshoumaru, Souta Higurashi
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16211 Read Count: 42925
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2010 Updated: 27 May 2010
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Transcending the Spider

Wow, this is really interesting, ladyb!  I can't wait to read more - I'd like to know how all this happened!  And I'm pleased to be your first reviewer.  ^^  This story - I'm sure - will be just as entertaining as 7FFT.  Good luck with the writing!