*PitaBread*
^_^ : Cheese, smut, kitties, the sun, Sesshoumaru, vampires, writing, SessKag, reading, shojou manga, dinosaurs, dragons, cars, and diet coke. These things make a happy Riti. (^w^)/
>.< : Onions, spiders (but I don't kill them), Bush (the president, lol), people who claim they are writers but it looks like they never finished school, bad grammar, animal abusers, and people that hate (ie: homophobes, racists, sexists, etc...). These things make for an unhappy Riti. >:((
A little about my writing:
I am FAR from perfect. I may not be the most exciting writer (I need to work on that), but I really try to have correct spelling and grammar. Also (this is a big pet peeve of mine) - please - if you are going to correct me, make sure you are right. I try to be as canon as possible (unless I'm writing AU), which means I use Japanese words and spellings. I also stick to what I know of the MANGA, not the anime. Anime is NOT canon in InuYasha. Only the manga in canon, which means the movies aren't canon either. The movies technically never "happened", because Rumiko-sensei didn't make those. WAY too many times I have had girl ask me, "What about Ayame??" Ayame doesn't exist. It was a character that Sunrise made up to make the story more interesting. ALSO - occasionally I contain spoilers. I read the manga as it comes out, so if something is written in my story that seems off, it might be because you don't know about it yet, so don't blame me.
I'm putting my disclaimer here: Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, Kagome, Kouga, Kikyou, Naraku, Kagura, Sango, Miroku, Kirara, Kohaku, and Rin do not belong to me. They are (c) Takahashi Rumiko. If they did, I would be rich, and therefore could afford a subscription for this account. Plus: Why would I write fanfiction about my own characters? If I did, it would just be fiction. Duh.
All other characters including: Sayuri, Nikki, Jason, John, Trent, Matt, Joey, and Ian are (c) ME.
I make no profit from these stories and only write them for my own and my fans' pleasure.
Thanks, and enjoy! -Pita
After reading a poetry scroll amongst the relics once belonging to Inuyasha's mother, Kagome traps herself and Sesshoumaru in another world, where they must journey through seven, different fairy tales and complete the poem if they wish to return home.
Well! I hadn't expected this chapter so soon, but it surely didn't disappoint. Not only was the battle great (although you almost had me thinking that Sesshoumaru was going to save her, but then what would be the point?) but I laghed myself silly at Fe-San's jabs at the ogres. Insulting their manhood! Ha! That was classic. Who knew the colorful little turkey had it in him? Awesome chapter!
WOW. I wasn't expecting a lemon! Haha, but I'm not complaining! That was not only a sweltering, citrusy scene, but also very realistic. Not many take his claws into account - therefore, how could he 'prepare' her? And the fact that he placed her in the 69 position - that was fabulous! Very, VERY good. Believe it or not, though, I'm even more eager to see what happens next.
I realize the story is almost at an end, but I wonder if you have another Q&A session planned? And if so... I want to know what Shiro thinks of this chapter! Hehe.
Ah, that was really beautiful, my friend! I feel like they each have had closure from the things that were troubling them. Kagome found out about her island time, and Sesshoumaru clarified their relationship. But I think the next tale is going to be the most interesting - now that they've shared something special, how will that impact the way they fulfill their next role? And I'm a little uneasy: Kagome was Momotaro in this one, so does that mean that Sesshoumaru is going to be the Moon Princess, Kaguya? Haha, that would be something. But if Kagome is the one, then wouldn't that mean she's the main character twice in a row? Unless Sesshoumaru's character is more important... Oh, so many questions. How I love this story. Great job.
On a more personal note, do you think this has killed your need for writing, or do you think you'll keep going? I remember when you first started 7FFT and we were talking about ideas over on PD you had some great ideas for AU's. Will you still do them, or has this stroy satisfied you?
Haha, of course! It will be interesting to see where you go with this one. Will she have to choose between Shesshoumaru and her 'parents'? I guess we'll find out.
You are so great with your twists and turns! I'm so interested to know the Earth Gods' story... I guess I'll find out soon enough!
Ah, I'd been busy with company from out of town, then I was sick for nearly two weeks, so I had no idea this had been updated... twice! But it was well worth my wait - these were two fabulous chapters. I loved the telling of the old gods' story, and Sesshoumaru battling the firerat was great. How simple - he just needed to be like a dog and rat! And I really like how you gave life to something no one knows anything about - Takahashi never said anything about the firerat. I especially love that the burrows were - of course - glass. It only made sense. And then the story of the fake quests. But I'm anxious to see what happens next - will Sesshoumaru have to save her from the Emperor? I guess we'll see... Great job!
Well, I can't say I'm glad it's over, but it was a lovely ending. You really cracked me up with the whole naked-Kagome scene. It makes perfect sense that she couldn't bring Kaguya's robes with her. And then the knowledge that Kagome made Sesshoumaru do it again with Inuyasha! How classic! I can't believe Inuyasha actually went for it.
Anyhow, this has been a wonderful journey, with grand tales and beautiful imagery. Thanks so much, my friend. I hope to see more of your writing!
InuYasha is an eccentric, reclusive rock star who hires Kagome as his personal assistant. She gets in a lot of shady, dangerous situations helping him look for the missing Shikon no Tama formula.
lulz
A good start to a seemingly good story! I must read more! How is it that we all think of Inuyasha as a rock star in AU's, lol? Well, maybe not all, but at least you and I do... Although my Inuyasha isn't quite as much of a jackass, hehe. I hope to see this through to the end - happy writing! :D
I always worry about that as well! I also knew I loved my husband from the moment we met, but since many kids (AKA, our readers, lol) don't believe that, I always find myself explaining to them that there are situations where you can fall in love rather quickly. This is great so far, and I'm really enjoying this. The only thing I disagree with (but in your particular story, I understand it, given the circumstances) is bashing Kikyou. I actually really like Kikyou. I think she's a strong and complex character, and people judge her too quickly because of Kagome. But don't get me wrong, Kagome's my girl! I adore her. I really wish Kagome and Sango would get together more often, but maybe I just haven't gotten far enough into the story yet... And yay for lemons! LOL
AGAIN - YAY FOR LEMONS!!! LMAO <3
Ooh... a Sea Monster? LOL I'm wondering if Kagura or any of the incarnations we know (and love) will show up. I fancy Kagura, although she really doesn't seem important to the story, so it really doesn't matter if she does show up or not. I'm also wondering when Sesshoumaru will show up again?
Man, 50 chapters... I commend you! I don't have nearly that many in any of my stories. I can't wait to see what happens with the sea creature. For now, Happy Writing!
This is really interesting! You need a little work with comma placement, though. Many sentances are run-ons. But your plot is good, and I'm happy that there are others trying to fit their stories into the current manga. Good work. I hope to see more!
Author's Response: Comma placement huh? Well I'll certaintly look out for that in the future. Thanks for taking the time to review and I'll try to update as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Comma placement huh? Well I'll certaintly look out for that in the future. Thanks for taking the time to review and I'll try to update as soon as possible.
XD This caught my eye. I mean, that was NOT FAIR. You put SessKag, climax, mating, and challenge in the same summary, and I'm supposed to look away?! Heresay! LOL Good job on this.
This is very lovely and angsty. Great job.
This is really cute! I'm not a SessRin shipper and I'd rather not make Kikyou the enemy, but it's your story. And it fits PERFECTLY with High School life. So much drama, and for nothing! lol Good job. ^^
Thanks, Nile. Thanks for ruining Sesshoumaru's hair for me, forever.
LOL Seriously, this was great. I TOTALLY thought you were gonna say it was Jaken's pee or something, haha!
Good job! :]
I lol'd. This was fun! I actually had an idea for the Respect-for-the-Aged holiday as well, but since it was over a month ago, I focused on my current stories. Awesome job on this!
This was cute, but it needs just the tinest bit of refinement. FYI, I'm moving it to 'drabbles', since it's not long enough to be qualified for the 'one-shot' category. :]
Haha, Sesshoumaru ogling Kagome's panties. That's great!
InuYasha is doomed and the least expected of all shows up to help. Witness how they handle the obstacles that present themselves as their union grows. InuYasha x Sesshomaru pairing.
WARNING: Hentai/Yaoi/Romance. If you do not like pairing between two males who are brothers then do not read this. This story contains explicit scenes for mature readers only.
This was really interesting. And the yaoi scenes were great! Your spelling is top-notch and you have very good grammar. Well done!
Author's Response: Dear PitaBread: Thanks so much for reading the story. I am glad to hear that you enjoyed the yaoi scenes. *blush* I have to admit that I enjoyed writing them but I agree with Snowball...I should add more instropection into all of that "physical interaction." Maybe someday I will edit the story so that we can see what are these two thinking about. Moreover, thanks for saying that my spelling and grammar were good. Since I don't have a beta I try my best to edit my own work; that is never easy to do. With appreciation, QS
AU. In a society of rampant racism and ‘holy’ brothels Inuyasha and Kagome meet from different parts of the world. What's a girl to do when faced with new realities, new hardships, and a new love? Rated M for lemons and slight violence
Well, hello there! What a great story! And what great editing! I wonder who does it for you, lol. Just wanted to say hi since I saw the story up. ^_^
Is it wrong of me to say this was a beautiful story? Yes, it was sad, thrilling, and even heart-breaking at times, but even without a 'happy' ending, their fates were left to the imagination. That's the best kind of ending there is. Thank you for this awesome story.
It's about time she did something sensible. But what of them? I guess it's on to the next chapter, then.
Well, then. On with the slaughter! Muahahahaha!!!
WOW. Initially, when I read about the salve and the other miko said it was 'impure', I thought, "Oh, damn. They made Sesshoumaru into ointment." Haha, wrong brother, I guess. I can't wait to see if this makes Kagome incredibly hateful.