Please finish update this story soon.  I didn't know  this site existed and I've been on maybe four times and I've read a couple of your stories and fell in love with them.  You are really good!  I can't wait to read more!  It's cool to see Narku in this light.  I've never read a story like this, I've read a lot of fan fiction!  I can't wait to see how these realtionships advance.  I love your version of characters!  I can't wait to read more.  You need no encouragement from us to write, your good be confident and write on!

Oh, will Kagome have to face her so called friends again?

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InuAngel

I love the part where Sessy thinks or says, something about her attempt to hide her diary, inside her stuffed bear for anyone to find it!  That was funny and flesh eating monkeys.  I love your story!  I can't wait for updates.  It's just I love Narku, your Narku I don't think I've read him in this light before it's great I love Kei he's the perfect instagator.  Sessy drunk and can barley hold it!  Love it!    Can't wait for more!  Write on!

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InuAngel

OOOhhhhhh!  Getting interesting.  Is Sessy going to admit how he feels about Kagome?  Are her natorious so called friends going to come back into her life and try to get revenge?  I can't wait for more I constantly check for updates!  I'm loving your Sessy and Narku.  Excellent job!

Write on!

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InuAngel

Cool!  I like your characters especially Akako and I love the nick name that Kagome gave her, Miss Kitty.  I can't wait till Kagome finds Inuyasha and will we know who Akako's father is?  Is it someone we know from the future?  Which I think is a great idea, Kagome has a kindred spirit, someone who has a sort of connection to her time.  Akako seems like so much fun!  I love the grocery store scene when Akako opted to stay outside when the teen boy walked by and winked at her.  Like her I have to touch everything, I also used that line once, when I was with my aunt, I opted to stay outside when some tasty guys walked by, my aunt jerked me by the arm inside the shop, muttering about teenage hormones or something, she still talks about that.  That was funny and brought back a few memories for me.  I'm so loving your story, I hope you continue it I have a million and three questions waiting to be answered.  Poor Koga and his kids.  It was sweet to see him and Inuyasha get along, you can tell they are some sort of friends on the show because they are always saving eachother, never really striking eachoter to cause any real damage, in the name of Kagome.  I think it's just male pride for them to just come out and say they are just friends.  Your story is awesome and I truly hope you continue it, you deserve to as an author, you owe it to your fans and to your story.  AWESOME!  Write on!

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InuAngel

You need not worry about reviews. Your story is pretty good, don't depend on others to help you finish it, your doing great!!!  I'm glad I came across it, I've been reading it all day.  Clam down relax ^_^  all is good.  Sometimes asking for reviews can turn your fans off.  I don't review till I read the third chapter, I like to give a story and the author a chance before I say anything.  I've read finished stories with zero reviews, that's confidence!  Hang in there you've got some readers hooked.  But I would ask my readers who Kagome should choose, I have trouble with that to.  I write fan fiction for my friends but I'm not brave enough to post yet I always have trouble choosing, who can?  Two hot demons, come on who can choose?  Since I can't choose and you can't choose, let the girl have her cake and eat it to.  Let her have both, then the brothers have to get along, that would be fun to write.  Don't choose, lucky girl.  Let her have it all!!!  I'm really enjoying your story, you have nothing to worry, just write!  I'm not putting you down for asking for reviews, I can understand your anxiety in wanting to write a good fic and feed back can be helpful and good sometimes and it can also be hurtful, just relax it will come. You'll see, reviews will flood in as you continue on.  I love the emotion you described when Sess ran out into the rain confussed, didn't know how to handle the emotions that rushed into him, someone like him it had to be terriable fighting his pride and just afraid of what he was feeling and not understanding it.  I could see him standing in the rain lightening flashing around him as he pounded the ground, the human he considered a daughter is in danger and he is helpless to help her.  Excellent moment written wonderfully, should be very proud of that.  My fav, part, excellent!  I just wished that Kagome took Shippou with her, but she did change her mind about going home at the last moment.   I do like your Kagome, I do hope she gets her warmth and spark back, I liked that about her, but being hurt can mess with you badly sometimes.  So are they all going to join forces now and go after Narku?  This can get very interesting, I can't wait for more.  Don't worry I don't review every chapter, I usually read a good story to the end, or as far as the author gets on it.  I hope you plan to finish this no matter what.  Relax, the reviews will come your doing great.  In truth it dosen't matter what we think it's what you think, it's your story go for it!  Still I say let the girl have both hot demons!  make both of them approach eachother (brothers) with the idea at the same time, can you see how funny that would be, Sess swallowing his pride, and Yash swallowing his anger all because they are madly in love with a human?  Make Kagome think about it.  Hey, it's your story do as you please, I'm getting carried away, told you sometimes reviews can be a bad thing. ^_^  Go for, Write on!

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InuAngel

I won't give up if you won't.  I understand about forcing yourself to do anything.  I hope the spark comes soon I'm dying here!  Don't force yourself I want your story to continue to be good.  If you force yourself it usually ends up a mess no matter what it is your doing.  Come on find that spark I know you have it in you.  I still think Kagome should look at what she has, two fine, damn hot demons drooling over her, not only fine but powerful!  I say keep them both Kagome!!!  Don't do something you'd regret!  Have your cake, pie and cookies with milk and enjoy it all!  Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

I'm glad my review gave you a boost that was my intension.

Wow!  This is great!  I ran across your story and decided to read it and I am so glad that I did, I stayed up half the night reading it and it was well worth it!  I've read a lot of stories with this theme but none like this one.  Usually Shippou gets left behind without his new parents, I love that he was able to come through.  I just love your Sessy, he's still Sess, but different for his family.  I love the affection he has for his brother, my fav part is when Inuyasha was crying and Sess put his head in his lap and shielded him with his hair and spoke with him, I could almost see them clearly.  Excellent writing!  I do love how Kagome's friends accepted her life and the fact that they were wrong to push Hojo on her.  Usually, her friends never know and when they do one is evil and untrustworthy. All those things and more make your story unique.  Usually, I cringe when Rin and Sess are put together, he raises her then marries her it's like a Woody Allen thing we talked about in Social Behavior class, but in this case it's cool.  I'm not flaming or bad mouthing anyone who likes the pairing, they are just stories of make believe characters.  Please don't take what I'm about to say as a flame, I do not nor will I ever flame an author, it's senceless, it's just discusting.  If your brave enough to post for the world to see, then that alone is worth "kudos", no one deserves to be flamed, I wanted to let you know that before I say this; I think the scene with Koga was to soon, it seemed to me he was rushed in to get his appearance over with and he left to easy, now you may have other plans for him I don't know so I'll have to wait and see.  I mean the man or wolf waited 500 years to claim her and he gives up just like that.  Like I said I have to wait and see.  The Hojo scene was great!  The part where Sess basically had to look at and he ran away.  Maybe, that is all it will take for a wimp like Hojo to keep him gone, but he to waited years for a date with her, will he just walk away, well run away and let go?  I hope you didn't take that as a flame it was not my intension.  Since I don't know your plans for this story I will have to wait and see!  I can't wait to meet your characters the BLack Wolf and her associates sounds a bit errie!  I'm so glad she's female!  You ROCK!  Update soon.  Write on!

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InuAngel

I'm so glad they are all back together and the jewel will now be whole, but will demons still come after them?  It was so funny that Kagome slappped Sessy like that, I was gaping then I just bust out laughing with Miroku.  Why does he still have the wind tunnel even after Narku has been defeated?  I can't wait till they get back to the house and explaine every thing!  It was so warming to see that Yash bonded them together, making them a real family.  It seemed that Yash learned a few things after believeing that he lost his friends and making sure they are together for always.  I can't wait to learn how!  I know Sessy has something to do with it, he has the power and the strength to do it.  Also, is he jealous that Yash made them pack?  He was a bit icy to the friend that asked him what was happening?  I can't wait to see how the brothers become closer. It seems that both learned to cherish friends and family when they believed to have lost them.  Like the saying goes "You don't know what you've got till it's gone." I'm so glad I found your story!!!!!!  You ROCK!  In case I haven't told you before!  Thanks!!!! Update soon, Write on!

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InuAngel

Awesome story!  I love it and am glad that I ran across it!  It's Sessy and Kagome, there is so much I can say about your story but I have to finish my paper for tomorrow.  It's sad in the beginning, that Kagome was holding onto hope that Yash would choose her, that her self esteem and self worth was that low.  With Yash knowing that she has feelings for her, he took advantage of her kindness and heart as well as took her for granted, well in short kinda strung her like like a jerk would, that kiss was a slap in the face. I am not a Yash hater, but your Yash is most likely how I believe he would act if he could fully have Kikyo back, great job.  Sess, with him is all bout strength, loyalty and honor and I'm glad he is changing towards Kagome, seeing her true worth as a woman and a friend and potetial lover.  To bad Shippou had to grow up, he's so cute! Sess is still cool Sess, and it's just cute to see him forcing himself to change his ways towards her, I know she earned his respect by just being herself but he is seeing that dominance isn't everything and dropping a bit of pride and submitting to what she needs isn't a sign of weakness.  Your story is excellent!  I'm hooked like a good book.  I hope he can go through the well with her, I believe it works with the heart.  How are her friends dealing with what Yash did?  Letting her go like that without a fight?  How is Yash gonna feel when he learns that Kikyos spell is only temporary?  Ohhhh!  I loved the description Sessy gave about Kikyo, I feel the same way, she is just to uppity, full of herself know it all, who betrayed herself, her love and his friends.  She changes sides like most of us girls change our underwear.  Not only that she was fooled so easily by someone she claimed to love and worse, she didn't accept her love for who he was, she wanted him to change.  That was so wrong, I feel the same as Sess about her.  Not bashing her just telling the truth, well, from my point of view.  Anyway, your story is great I can't wait to read more so I hope you update real soon.  I know Kagome's mom is gonna love him, by the way he treats her.  I can't wait for more.  Ohh I'm glad you didn't make your Kagome bow down to him, let her keep herself.  Fiesty and independant! Write on!

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InuAngel

Cute how he got out of fully answering Kagome's quesiton of why does he care who her friends are!  It will be interesting to see Sess's reaction on the streets, not having people cower from him or treating him like royality.  Kagome may come home more exhausted than she does when she come home from fighting demons.  I like the last chapter when Kagome reminded him of his strength, telling him that his hands can rip through trees, Sess actually looked at his hands as if he just realized how strong he is.  I think Sess is just oblivious of himself and what he can do.  I don't think he really means to hurt Kagome physically, I think he truly dosen't know.  Am I right?  He is getting better and willing to pay more attention to his own actions.  I've been reading some of Snowbirds reviews I understand her completley, I married right out of highschool barly 18, to escape the verbal abuse in our home with my parents to eachother and to me, only to fall into a world of physcal, verbal and emotional abuse at the hands of my husband, who knew exactly, what he was doing.  He didn't need to look at his hands as if he didn't know what he was capable of, he knew.  I stayed with him for a year and five months.  He stripped me of friends and family, I had nobody, I left when I was 5 months pregant, nearly losing my baby due to him and lost some vision, I walked out of the hospital before he could come get me, and haven't looked back.  He found me right after her birth, I panicked and was going to run and refused, I dared him to come near us.  apparently he's not as stuid as I thought he was, he never came near, I just changed my number.  I'll be damned if my little girl grows up with that.  I haven't dated in 3 years and have no intension to. I'm doing good and so is my daughter.  One day I'll say yes to the many that seem to ask me out, just not ready.  Snowbird, use these stories to help you grow.  Don't be hurt or offended, sometimes another persons story can be your blessing.  I didn't want to say anything I don't want to offend the author, it's a story.  I appreciate these types of stories sometimes.  Thank to you Maiko Anna, for being brave to write such a story.  To see Sessy change like this, but he is nothing like a true abuser, he just truly didn't realize what he was doing.  That line when Kagome told him just how strong he really is got me and gave me hope for his future with Kagome and I do hope he will get past his stubborn pride and apologise to her.  I am not making excuses for abusers. Definatley not. I am truly enjoying your story and watching your characters constanly grow and develope.  I can't wait to see what other trouble, dense Hojo stirs up for himself.  That kid is unbelieveably dense and boring on the show and persistant as Kouga, I sometimes wonder if he isn't Kouga's reincarnation. (haha).  I truly love your story I check daily for update!  I hope all have had a Happy Thanksgiving!  Update soon. Write on!

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InuAngel

I was right it is getting good!  i thought it was so cool that it rained due to Sessy's mood.  Will Kagome find out the truth about what happened between him and Yash?  I can't wait for more!  I love the way your story flows and all the surprises.  Also watching Sess grow emotionally and trying to deal with them. Excellent! Write on!

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InuAngel

Awesome! Applause! Tears!  I'm choked up!  Horray for Sessy finally discovering his pride is not as important as he thought it to be!! Your writing is excellent, I was walking through that house with them.  Except Kagome has more restraint than I do, I'm always touching!  I hope that house aslo repairs things, cause I would probably break a lot of stuff.  It sounds so beautiful and magical the way you described it was perfect!  I was there, I saw the waterfalls, heard the sounds that are possibly there and the colors.  All sences were working overtime.  Beautifully done.  Your story and writing is getting better and better with each chapter.  Not that it was bad or needed work in the first place.  I hope you are having fun writing this because I am definately enjoying reading it.  Until next time. Write on!

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InuAngel

All I can say is AWESOME!  OMG!  This is an excellent story!  I can't wait to read more, this Kogua is more irratating than any other Kogua I have read, excellent!  I always have a bit of a soft spot for the overbearing, slightly psycho, delussional, hardheaded stalker.  He's so cute.  I love this story.  I thought Miroku and Inuyasha would have more sence than to leave her alone in her room after such a drink, I figured it was Kouga who had it set up.  When will Kagome read the manual?  Hey, this was an excellent idea for a story a place where demons can be who they are and still have human interaction.  It's great, I thought at first with the first chapter that the females should be warned about the carnal way they pick women and they should make sure they understand that they give up their human rights in that area on that territory, but, they do get a manual and are urged to read it.  Any way some will still  ignore it, if it was spoken to their faces.  The description of the place makes me want to go there.  This is so awesome and unique, I'm truly blown away by your work!  I can't wait for more, write on!

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InuAngel