Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:50:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
wait... whaaaa....???
omg you sick people !! lol
this was somethin else.... now i'm just searching for that horsey pick lol woowwww....
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 10:05:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
holy shit Keva now that is a twist!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 12:51:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! That is over the top Keva! I totally did a double read to make sure I was reading the same story.... it was very unexpected. Very good... I am sure our most hentai-ish writers from the past and now could not execute such a good plot as this.
Author's Response: HA! HAHA! Got ya! Ya know the story this was based on ended with it being the dude's mom and I thought oh yea this would be awesome as a fanfic and viola there you have it... I have another idea for a stroy with a severe plot twist but I have to decide on who I am going to pair in that one. So we'll see; I want to get a few of my unfinished done before I move on to creating anything new.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2009 11:33:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ewww...spider incest. I must admit, that was not what I expected at the end. But truthfully, I had very little idea what the ending might entail. Creepy...
Well, this story has been so very fun! Can't wait for whatever else you've got hiding in that gleefully twisted head of yours...hehe.
Thanks for the ride! :)