[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 9:33:23 AM Title: Blood
I find myself drawn to this story out of morbid curiosity. I don't really know how to describe this story. Except it's how I would imagine Naraku would really behave and it appeals to the dark side of Kagome. I'm not into chains but I'd much prefer them to being ejaculated on, though. That was always a turn-off for me. Some people like it and to each their own. Is he not ever going to come inside her anymore? Her body should have adjusted by now to his poison/acid. I caught where he seemed to be having an internal struggle over some beginnings of feelings for Kagome that seemed to puzzle him. Also, I'm glad you made him a virgin and Kagome was his first. It would really be something if now his and her souls were somehow bonded now because of them being virgins and influenced by the jewel. In a dark way they belong together.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 5:27:41 AM Title: Hesitation/ Hesitating
It is like she is under a spell, or perhaps she is broken and lost under Naraku's watch. It is definitely tantalizing in the way he enjoys himself through her defilement. I just cannot find any way to be disgusted.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:35:43 AM Title: Gentle
How long will it take to break her... I wonder how this will go and if he will keep her or discard her. I cannot wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: It will take at least 36 tries... more if I think she needs it. As to keeping or discarding, I haven't decided - I guess that all depends on how... entertaining she can be. :) This one seems to be writing itself - there must be someone whispering in my own ear late at night I'm very glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:29:54 AM Title: Freedom/Restraint
Ooh... very cold... I would shiver too!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2008 4:26:21 AM Title: Love
Wow... that has to be the best Naraku scene I have read so far... you have written his character to the T.
Author's Response: Thank you - that is high praise indeed!