[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2008 12:07:24 AM Title: Out of Body
Very good scene... InuYasha and the others in anguish and Naraku wins once again
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2008 12:01:54 AM Title: Realization
Holy crap, that was very unexpected. I did not think he would have the rest of the inu-tachi witness them.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 11:28:31 PM Title: Haunted
Wow... that was friggin awesome. I actually do hate Kikyo...woohoo.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 10:09:55 PM Title: Spank
Well, that was not expected that he would encourage her to beat back on him after the spanking.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 10:00:02 PM Title: Deep
Very hot! Naraku has really done a good job of taming her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 9:43:14 PM Title: Blush
What a climax!!! It is truly a new form of 'bringing down the house'
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2008 9:13:33 PM Title: New
Very and deliriously wanton...:)
Date: 30 Dec 2008 6:00:23 AM Title: Dreams
Oooh... Wicked little bitch! I love it. Give him a taste of his own medicine; he needs that sometimes to remind him he can't always control everything; external forces will always work against him.
And nice dream sequence. I'm sure that that's what he would dream were he real. Very awesome.
Whelp get better soon being sick sucks ass but it also gives you a lot of free time and the meds give you some crazy ideas. I have a story out there in fanfiction land that when I came down off of medication I was wondering what the hell was I thinking but everyone loved it so much I left it out there. Sickos seriously....
Date: 27 Dec 2008 4:50:05 AM Title: Out of Body
Awww... he's going to keep her. He would be sad if he didn't. Although he would deny it with his entire being. Bastard!
Killing Inu emotionally; very nice. That dumb dog gets everything he deserves and then some. But there's one thing I'm not understanding and perhaps you can help me with this. How the heck did Miroku become unconscious? And where was Shippou? And why didn't her family cross her mind when she saw the tree? And does Inu know his beloved dead thing is… um… well dead?
I want to know why dang it! See this is why I don't like reading stories until they are complete. I hate to wait… it sucks ass. Oh well I guess I will have to be a good girl and wait. So hurry the heck up! Much love. Keva
Date: 26 Dec 2008 4:31:32 AM Title: Realization
Uh-Oh... Bum... Bum... Bummm... Poor Inu he gets no love. I feel sorry for him... No I don't. I'm just not a real big fan of the inuhanyou. Oh well; he gets what he deserves for playing with nasty dead things.
I really hope she doesn't go all soft like many make her do when it comes to Inu. Sympethetic yes... a big ol' softie... no way.
Kami I just love the dark bastard and can't wait to see what he has in store for her next. Good job. Much love. Keva
(Oooh a short one today. Wow I must be tired.)
Date: 23 Dec 2008 5:27:43 PM Title: Behind
Yea he'll make her scream like the naughty girl she is. Or maybe she'll make him scream; it'd serve him right
Spanking Naraku...
Mmm... Mmm... Mmmmm... Nummy nummy!
Here is how I see him in my mind if it will help at all. Imagine him all smoldering, dark, broody, domineering, built like a brick wall, and just all around sexy. Yeah Naraky baby!
If you have ever seen Zyephen's rendering of him you would see mostly what I see when I imagine him; just not as feminine? Maybe a little more masculine. Here is the link if you want to check it out.
http://www.paperdemon.com/art/view/12643
I have to thank PitaBread for the link; it's her friend that did the drawing.
Ya know I'm glad there's someone else out there who shares the same passion for the dark one I do. I don't feel soo alone anymore nor am I as ostracized as I was when I first started writing stories about him oh so long ago.
I actually had to pull all my earily works on him due to the immense amount of hate reviews I was receiving and just settled with Sessy because everyone loves him.(Insert sarcasm here.)
Just because Naraku is evil it doesn't mean he ain't sexy and I think I'm getting the word out. I'm on a one woman mission to bring him to the top. I refuse to be silenced!
Okay I'm getting way off line here. Thanks for your reviews and am still lovin your story. Can't wait to see what happens next with your story. Much love. Keva
Date: 20 Dec 2008 10:55:15 AM Title: Secrets
HA! That is so A-typical of Naraky baby to set her up. He's such a bastard; but that is why we love him so. All dark, methodical, scheming, and domineering... If he were real we would all be in some serious serious trouble. Unless we bowed down and promised complete obeidence to him. I could do that.
Ys know I was thinkin that Naraky-poo needs a piercing as well just for the sake of tit for tat. It would so be fitting and rather hot because your story is just soooooooooo naughty. I'm suprised that you have more naughty things for them to do.
I do have one question however; what the heck are the other players in the story doing all this time? Shouldn't her friends (Inu not necessairly included) be wonder where the heck she is or at least her family?
Why am I posing these questions to you? You know what you're doing and where you are going with this. I just hope he doesn't end up killing her because that will make me sad and I just know he will miss her but would never admit it.
Oh for craps sake! It's never ending with me is it? I should just write a story for you of my review so you can read that instead.
Alright that's it I'm sooo done. I promise. Not another word from me. Good chapter and can't wait for more naughty abuse. (Okay no more words but those.) Much love. Keva
Date: 18 Dec 2008 10:00:42 AM Title: Haunted
Oh how kawaii!! He liiiiiikes her. Although his stubborn black heart would never admit it. Jerk!
And she is realizing what a little hentai she is. The bad girl hidden deep insdie the good girl.
So I wonder will she become even more dark and naughty now that she has her stolen piece of soul back? It seems like she would as Kikyo was mean mean mean mean and rather self serving.
I wonder though; will Kags have one more flare up of definace against her new dark side? It seems like she would if she is analyzing her position as a slave to the dark one. Ya know the final calsh between the good and evil within her; the ultimate battle that finally pushes her over the edge?
I guess I will have to wait and see. I hate to wait; especially since I'm stuck at home being sicker than a dog. I have nothing better to do.
For crying out loud! See this is why I don't like giving reviews. I go off on these stupid little tangents for no rhyme or reason and I'm more than certain that no one cares but yet I continue to do it anyway.
That's it! Shut up Keva and just tell her she did a good job and end it already!
You did an awesome job and can't wait for more. Much love. Keva
Author's Response:
Being taunted like 7 year old on the playground about my cuteness made me smile so WIDE! You cheer me up, woman! :)
You may natter on and on in any of my story's reviews that you want - I like it!
Please feel better soon - gotta love the Snot-Rhino! :) Thanks for reading and I'm really enjoying "Copping a Feel" - Tell Kagome I'll whip Naraku if her arm's getting sore...it'd be my wicked pleasure...hehe.
Date: 16 Dec 2008 6:24:04 PM Title: Silk
I work in the medical field and know how dangerous blood can be at times. I just hope whoever practices this, does so with safety and pretesting. There are many blood diseases and certain medicines thin the blood making it difficult to stop bleeding even from a small cut or puncture. So I say, be careful.
Author's Response:
So do I - I'm an RN on a very busy surgical/Orthopedics floor. That being said, your warning is indeed an important one! Hepatitis and HIV are nothing to sneeze at and Coumadin and Lovenox are a pain in the ass if you don't plan ahead. But this fantasy is just that - and fun is fun.
But if I had one chapter to happily trade places with my subjugated little priestess - this'd be the one. Beautiful, beautiful red, slick pain...yum!
Thanks for caring enough about us all to give warning. :)
Date: 16 Dec 2008 7:00:06 AM Title: Silk
EEEEEWWWWWWWW!! Much to much blood for my tastes.
Sticky, slippery, and hot bodies rolling around with each other; I believe they need a bloody water hot spring soak.
Oh and one more thing. I find myself doing this all the time and constanly fixing one stupid letter; but your at and as-es. You have weird turn around on those.
I'm sure it's just a typo but I thought I would point it out to you as you are an awesome writer. Then again I can understand that after writing 5k something words they all look to be spelled correctly. I call it the alphabet acid trip; they look right until you really look at it then you realize that it isn't.
Oh well; I'll shut up now as I seem to be off on some stupid rambling tangent. This is probably why I don't review very much; I never know when to quit. Thanks for the Circling Fates review by the way; it was greately appreciated. Although not many are reading it becasue it's ins't some hentai story with tons of sex. Gawd we live in a world of pervs. Miroku would be proud.
Gah I'm doing it again. Okay I'm going to shut up now and let you get on with your life instead of listening to my wandering thoughts. Much love Keva.
Author's Response:
OMG! Alphabet acid trip! Congrats - you win the "funniest shit of my week" award! That's exactly the correct description of that evil brain fog that settles in after about 2 hours and a few thousand words.
As to the strange sentence structure, I think it might have something to do with the way I talk. It tends to be quite circular; thoughts winding around, sometimes chasing each other in circles. That's one of the many reasons I'm not a teacher - or a professional writer. Thanks for bringing it to my attention - I am going to do one holy-hell of an edit once this monster is done.
I'm one of those many pervs, but I do have literary interests other than sex. Good fiction is good fiction, regardless of content. So worry not - you'll always have my eyes glued to your many pages :) Thanks for the love! Love is always good.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:51:30 PM Title: Giving Orders
Wilderness I must say your sick, twisted, and preverted....
.....I like that in a person...wink ..
great story!
Date: 15 Dec 2008 4:21:53 AM Title: Deep
Okay so I finally caught up reading this story and all I can think is; I wouldn't mind being a slave to the dark bastard. I just love him. He's so dark and evil and fun to torture and a heck of a lot easier to write. (Much more personality than the ice prince)
Once again good job and look forward to your next bout of inspiration. Muich love. Keva
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:27:19 AM Title: Deep
am ... am speechless ... my god!... cold shower time!
Date: 15 Dec 2008 3:03:50 AM Title: Discipline
*bows deeply* That means a lot - thank you. I will do my evil best to continue to please.
Date: 14 Dec 2008 3:35:23 PM Title: Discipline
Oh and one other thing. This story reminds me of the song S.O.S by Apocalyptica. You should hear that song; very cool and soooo this story.
Author's Response: Actually I worte this one to Kronos Quartet's Sigur Ros cover - "Flugufrelsarinn". I sniffed out Apocalyptica - you're right; they are very good. Good choice.
Date: 14 Dec 2008 3:32:06 PM Title: Discipline
Okay now I very rarely ever review a story but after the one you gave me I was more than a little compelled to read your Naraku stories and I have to say thus far I LOVE THEM! You are doing an amazing job of portraying the wicked one. Kudos to you. Whoot! Whoot!
I will finish reading this later as I have a few errands to run. Can't wait to continue on this perverse journey. I'm such a hentai... Don't tell anyone I said that. Much love. Keva
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:14:54 PM Title: Comfort/Fear
oh crikey Kag the Domme woot woot no more pansy ass
Date: 11 Dec 2008 10:23:24 PM Title: Footsteps
Yep. Hooray! He's getting more and more addicted to her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2008 7:16:43 PM Title: Blush
Haha. That was really some coupling. Expecially to bring down the building around you. In the beginning, he set out to ensnare her in his web. I think she's beginning to spin her own web around him. It seems their both becoming so bonded to each other that they won't be able to kill the other even if they tried. To borrow from a Tom Cruise movie, they complete each other.
Author's Response: Hmmm...desire makes us do strange things. Could these two possibly have a happy ending? I'm not sure yet. Thanks for the comment! I hope you continue to enjoy :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2008 4:09:34 PM Title: Hesitation/ Hesitating
Wow! You just ended the chapter too soon. haha. So it would seem her body now craves his poison/acid. You know, only one wiriter has ever addressed that issue in a Sess/Kag story. He secretes poison/acid, too, but no one ever brings that up whenever they couple them together. I never really considered that until reading this story. I think in the future, I'll be asking that question before the coupling takes place. Sometines I like challenging writers with questions. Not always, but sometimes they thank me for opening up new doors and possibities. haha.
Author's Response:
Another reader had posed the question of just how deep Naraku's shouki might run within him. Since he's a being incapable of any nurturing, careing or loving it made sense to me to make even his seed a poison. There is nothing to him but death, evil and jealousy... at least for a while. Even a corrupt priestess has some power; even the most dominated slave can turn the tables on their master.
I am all about questions! Fire away! :)