[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2008 10:49:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
O_O wait it must be a desendant it can't be Sango Sess would just have said so right
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[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2008 2:46:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope your baby feels better soon! OMG! what is really going on? I wish I was in your head at this moment to get an idea of what you are thinking. I still have a shard theory but I think you've blown it out of the water. Until next post!!
Date: 23 Nov 2008 5:27:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was great! It was tooooo short, (sniffle), but I can see what your doing with that one. It's sad she can't pass through one more time to say good bye I almost cried. Very well written! Excellent! Thanks for the update! I understand why Kouga won't come back. Even in the series, he may be a pain in the ass but he's not stupid, he always ran off when things got to hot or someone was to strong. He wants to be around to see another day. Hojo is quite a wimp, a boring, nerve wracking wimp, but he's kinda stupid. I'm glad Kagome's friends are still sticking with her no matter how weird things are getting, it also seems that they have grown up a lot with this experience. I'm still excited and tickled that Shippou is around to be with his adoptive parents. I know Mama H is gonna just spoil him more that Kagome did. Now I can't wait to see how Inuyasha adapts and what kind of work will he have to do to earn a living for his new family. I'm sure Sess has things lined up for him. There is a lot I can't wait to see. I think he'd make a good architect specializing in fedual era natural hot springs, something realted to where he is from or has done besides fight. I dont' know just a thought. Like I said excellent writing once again, until next update, soon I hope Write on!
thanks for the nice reply to my review.
Much Love
InuAngel
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2008 3:16:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
An interesting development with the powers! The part when Kagome found out about the well and her reaction had me tearing as well. Good job and until the next post!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2008 12:06:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
its sad but at least her and Inu and shippo are together and now she has a new big brother :D Sesshomaru! and another sister Rin!
Date: 22 Nov 2008 12:23:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is great! I ran across your story and decided to read it and I am so glad that I did, I stayed up half the night reading it and it was well worth it! I've read a lot of stories with this theme but none like this one. Usually Shippou gets left behind without his new parents, I love that he was able to come through. I just love your Sessy, he's still Sess, but different for his family. I love the affection he has for his brother, my fav part is when Inuyasha was crying and Sess put his head in his lap and shielded him with his hair and spoke with him, I could almost see them clearly. Excellent writing! I do love how Kagome's friends accepted her life and the fact that they were wrong to push Hojo on her. Usually, her friends never know and when they do one is evil and untrustworthy. All those things and more make your story unique. Usually, I cringe when Rin and Sess are put together, he raises her then marries her it's like a Woody Allen thing we talked about in Social Behavior class, but in this case it's cool. I'm not flaming or bad mouthing anyone who likes the pairing, they are just stories of make believe characters. Please don't take what I'm about to say as a flame, I do not nor will I ever flame an author, it's senceless, it's just discusting. If your brave enough to post for the world to see, then that alone is worth "kudos", no one deserves to be flamed, I wanted to let you know that before I say this; I think the scene with Koga was to soon, it seemed to me he was rushed in to get his appearance over with and he left to easy, now you may have other plans for him I don't know so I'll have to wait and see. I mean the man or wolf waited 500 years to claim her and he gives up just like that. Like I said I have to wait and see. The Hojo scene was great! The part where Sess basically had to look at and he ran away. Maybe, that is all it will take for a wimp like Hojo to keep him gone, but he to waited years for a date with her, will he just walk away, well run away and let go? I hope you didn't take that as a flame it was not my intension. Since I don't know your plans for this story I will have to wait and see! I can't wait to meet your characters the BLack Wolf and her associates sounds a bit errie! I'm so glad she's female! You ROCK! Update soon. Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Author's Response: THank you so mush for the constructive criticim. I'm grateful for it. I know I rushed the bit with Koga. It was less that he had waited five-hundred years to claim her than no other woman would put up with him long enough to stay. Sess said that he was still causing trouble. He figured since he could smell so much of Inuyasha's blood he must have died. what better way to get the girl then comforting her after her beau dies. Instead of finding a grieving Kagome he finds a more powerful Inuyasha. He wasn't prepared for that. As for Hojo he's a spinless weaking that's all. I don't like it when her friends aren't supportive it sucks. I also never liked that the brothers were trying to kill each other. Brothers should be friends. Family should be there for one another. Thanks for the comment about Sess and Rin glad you liked my spin. I'm so glad you read it and let me know how you liked it. As for the Blackwolf and Co. wait and see she's hell on wheels. :) Eluwei
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2008 11:43:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
this is getting interesting thanks for updating
Author's Response: Your Welcome.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2008 8:30:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOOOHOOOO! their mates their mates woot woot!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2008 6:04:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Totally enjoyed this! The idea of Kagome giving him permission to finally take down Koga was priceless. I was truly tickled! I'll be here whenever you post.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it. I couldn't pass up the Koga bashing. I can't stand him. He's such a pain in the ass. Thanks for keeping an eye out for me. I'll try to get more up tonight.
Date: 19 Nov 2008 6:39:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was wondering if he was somewhere in this story! The marking was beautifully done. Can't wait until next time.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2008 11:47:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm too tickled to see Rin on the scene. I'm curious to see how her friends take to the latest addition. I'm enjoying this and I can't wait until next post!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2008 9:33:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
it is a very sweet story am glad to see Rin in it
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2008 12:33:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so glad you had Hojo put in his place. He is a dim and persistant little bugger! Enjoyed the chapter and eagerly awaiting the next post!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I always thought he was a pain in the butt. I'm working on Chapter nine.
Date: 12 Nov 2008 6:47:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
True it was short but very enjoyable and helped to move the plot along by increasing the girls understanding of the true ages of youkai. You did leave a whopper of a cliffhanger! Can't wait until next time.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2008 3:44:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
its such a nice story can't wait for next chapters
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on it when I have time.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2008 3:27:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it love it love it .... was great how you had him explain his change of heart will there be more?
Author's Response: Oh yes, there will be much more. I'm so glad that you like it. :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2008 3:10:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
I did like it. I enjoyed the why behind his change and the fact that Sess was there for their friends when they couldn't be. Kagome will be crushed about the well but now you have me intrigued. I wonder where the last shards are? I think I know but I'll wait to see your next chapter. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! If your thinking the last shards are with Koga they're not. Thank you again.
Date: 08 Nov 2008 9:41:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great story and I can't help but wonder what wa the motivation behind Sess showing up in the nick of time? I'm glad he is willing to help Inuyasha out. Can't wait to see your next post.
Author's Response: Everything shall be explained as to Sess and his reasons. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2008 12:38:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
It is good Sesshoumaru had stepped in.... I was not sure if InuYasha would pull through on Kagome and rudimentary first aid.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2008 3:50:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh this is such a great story can't wait to read more
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you like it. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2008 7:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Are Kagome's powers helping him any... he just seems in so much pain.
Author's Response: Yes they are. The problem is he's losing his own power. The new moon is during the coming night after all. So his normal rate of healing is greatly reduced. The next chapter will be better. Thank you again for all of your reviews. I look forward to them. I'm grateful for the constructive thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2008 12:23:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh my word poor Inu*sniff* ive been on the edge of my seat the entire time.the suspense is starting to get me.i hope kagomes freinds dont go and screw everything up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We'll see what the girls do about all of this. Thank you again. Reviews really make my day.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2008 8:38:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! You have to update NOW!!!!!!!!! Btw update update upadate update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease UPDATE now!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I working on it as fast as I can. With four kids, a dog, and a house to care for my time is short. I will try to get chapter three up today. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2008 4:12:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is he going to die? It seems so serious and he actually is to the point he will admit that he is not alright. *worries*
Author's Response: Have Faith. My friend, have faith. Thank you for reviewing again. I was hoping you would.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2008 12:38:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will Shippou get through? The cold voice at the door... may I guess... Sesshoumaru?
I hope Kagome's friends can keep a secret.
Author's Response: Good questions. Thank you so much for the review. I hope to get more posted today.