Date: 28 Aug 2009 2:19:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW, i mean you are really good, except for the couple grammar mistakes.
But really you share the emotion of the story amazingly well. And you stay true to the characters as much as possible.
Please keep writing :)
Date: 30 Nov 2008 4:02:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I totally didnt see that one coming! I have soooo many questions, please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 2:37:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am really loving the story lol evenly though I eagerly wait for the next chapter I hope you have a good holiday season.
Date: 26 Nov 2008 9:55:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad they are all back together and the jewel will now be whole, but will demons still come after them? It was so funny that Kagome slappped Sessy like that, I was gaping then I just bust out laughing with Miroku. Why does he still have the wind tunnel even after Narku has been defeated? I can't wait till they get back to the house and explaine every thing! It was so warming to see that Yash bonded them together, making them a real family. It seemed that Yash learned a few things after believeing that he lost his friends and making sure they are together for always. I can't wait to learn how! I know Sessy has something to do with it, he has the power and the strength to do it. Also, is he jealous that Yash made them pack? He was a bit icy to the friend that asked him what was happening? I can't wait to see how the brothers become closer. It seems that both learned to cherish friends and family when they believed to have lost them. Like the saying goes "You don't know what you've got till it's gone." I'm so glad I found your story!!!!!! You ROCK! In case I haven't told you before! Thanks!!!! Update soon, Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2008 8:24:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad to see that the gang is all together and I am thrilled that Inu marked them all as his pack. You really made my day by allowing Kagome smack Sessy! He so deserved it. I'm glad to see the little ones are better and I hope you have a happy holiday (if you celebrate it) and I can't wait until next post!