Reviews For Desperation
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Date: 27 Nov 2008 4:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 4:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was great! I think your death-bed proposal came out better than mine did! Seriously, great job! Shippou referring to Inuyasha and Kagome as "Mama" and "Papa" is very cute, and makes his character seem more "real" than he usually appears.
Another ten!
Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2008 7:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2008 7:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Are Kagome's powers helping him any... he just seems in so much pain.
Author's Response: Yes they are. The problem is he's losing his own power. The new moon is during the coming night after all. So his normal rate of healing is greatly reduced. The next chapter will be better. Thank you again for all of your reviews. I look forward to them. I'm grateful for the constructive thoughts.