[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:21:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! so whats going to happen next? I can't belive it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2008 4:06:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very good! Again, it's dialogue-heavy, but the dialogue does not feel forced, and comes off as necessary to the chapter (and that's kind of hard to pull off well), but you did it!
As far as Sesshomaru goes, he does seem a bit out of character, but that's okay...as obviously, he needed to seem a bit out of character to fit the story properly. What matters is that he still feels like Sesshomaru, and he does. Great job there, too!
Again, the "next" button is calling me. Another ten!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2008 8:38:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! You have to update NOW!!!!!!!!! Btw update update upadate update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease UPDATE now!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I working on it as fast as I can. With four kids, a dog, and a house to care for my time is short. I will try to get chapter three up today. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2008 4:12:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is he going to die? It seems so serious and he actually is to the point he will admit that he is not alright. *worries*
Author's Response: Have Faith. My friend, have faith. Thank you for reviewing again. I was hoping you would.