Date: 12 Nov 2013 4:16:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
You should keep up the good work please make more chapters it was getting good. I love drama and how the story is going too. (:
Date: 13 Jan 2011 6:36:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
update! great story :)
Date: 27 Jun 2009 5:56:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I guess I can finally give up on this story and quit checking for future updates. Another good story idea just bit the dust.
Date: 16 Dec 2008 5:45:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hello!!!! When are you going to update? You tease us with 3 chapters of an enticing plot and then nothing. Give at least an A/N to let us know if something unforseen prevents you updating the story.
Date: 06 Dec 2008 12:09:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Where are you? It's been a whole month since the last update. When you eventually do update, I'll have to go back and re-read the previous chapters to refresh my memory on everything and to get back the feel and mood of the story.
Date: 17 Nov 2008 2:33:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow.. i like this story so far.. Good writing and what a great plot...
I can't wait to see if the tables get turned on Sesshomaru,, and i hope that Kags comes out a strong person and not some weakling..
So far so good, can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry and update..
Take Care
Mari
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2008 3:24:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU ARE POSTING AGAIN!!!! And yes, such glorious news deserves all caps!! I love your stories (and the ones that you are taking over) and have been reading them and reading them over and over just wishing you'd come back to us. AND YOU HAVE!!! Okay, may I also suggest that you post at Dokuga.com. We had a long discussion in the forum there about you and everyone wishes so much that you'd post there. Okay again, now on to my review. I'm loving this new story of yours. You have everyone in such great character and I can't wait to see what happens in future. How will Fluffy get Kagome? Will he actually be able to humiliate her? Oh, the suspense of a well written fic! Loved it! Please, give me more.
LC Rose
Date: 15 Nov 2008 11:25:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the plot of this story. There's just one thing you've done to Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru that I am going to ignore. YOU CUT THEIR HAIR! When I picture them in my mind, they will still have their beautiful long hair especially Sesshoumaru. His neck is too long and slender to ever look good with short hair. Out of curiosity, why did you give them short hair when you left some of the other males with long hair?
Date: 12 Nov 2008 9:04:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
UPDATE!!!!! Update soon! I love it love it love it!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2008 4:15:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'd have to agree. Spanish is my first language. English was difficult growing up. I know it probably was easier than japanese due to the commonality in latin roots of a lot of words.
Please do continue. I am itching to read more. Your story is in such great depth in description that I'm impressed. I've already favorited this story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2008 4:12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm like Kagome. Surprisingly I have sushi Fridays with my gal pals here in Miami. I'm sure its not like going somewhere in Japan, which I'd like to go one day.
All of the inu group has a good sense of foreboding. With their rivalry with the other group led by Sess, it is no wonder.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2008 3:42:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
The rivalry is splendid. Way to set the pace of the plot and scene. I think Kagura is very pathetic hanging on Sesshoumaru. He really doen't care for her nor anything. Perfectly in character
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2008 2:03:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. You do a great job of keeping them in character in an AU setting. You have also done well in executing the setting and having InuYasha explained more about demons.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2008 3:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very cruel of them. Also very plausible as I had gone to a high school large enough to have people like that. Thankfully I was not a target, but I really hated it when I saw others suffer for the dumb stuff that was concocted.
I love it... I have always enjoyed your writing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2008 3:08:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this seems interesting. I like it! Hope you update soon! :]
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2008 2:03:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
The tension between them was intense. Very nice keeping all of them in character in an AU setting.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2008 1:09:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
write more because i have to write 2 so what the point