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Reviewer: Lorisa45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2008 1:34:11 PM Title: Chapter 17: Truth Be Told

Please Finish this story Please this is getting good!

 



Author's Response: I know, I know!  LOL  I just haven't been able to get into the happiness of this story, since my other story is darker.  But I promise I haven't abandoned it!

Reviewer: dirtydogs57 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2008 12:48:23 PM Title: Chapter 17: Truth Be Told

AAAHHH!!!!!

 

*Must touch ears* So not only do you leave it at that, but you're going to work on other stories?!?! *rips hair out*

 

I loved the angst and trepidation in this chapter. I love how he felt energized by the changes he has made. He sure had been torturing himself for some time now. I can;t wait to see how she reacts to his ocnfession, and also if she finds out that the two are brothers. ^_^ Excellent work as always! 



Author's Response:

Hehe, thanks so much!

Yes, unfortunately.  It's the curse of having to huge stories out at the same time.  Never again!  I actually abandoned TWLG so I could write two chapters in a row for Choices. 

I'm glad you liked it!  I love angst, so I'm happy you appreciate how much I put in to this chapter.  I think Inuyasha went through his changes to give him the courage to tell her - after all, the last time he told his girlfriend, it backfired on him.  So he was really anxious.  It's almost like telling your partner you cheated on them.  Takes a lot of guts to do it. 

And yeah, she's going to find out soon about the brothrs, but I'm not giving away HOW she finds out, lol.

Thank you for reviewing, my dear!  I appreciate it, and I'm happy you're enjoying the story!  <3

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