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Reviewer: dirtydogs57 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2008 1:41:55 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Vacation, Part Two

Oh Sessoumaru...you really turned me off in this one *tsk tsk* I don't blame Kagome for feeling a bit uneasy about his attentions. For someone so used to working hard to achieve her goals, being lavished upon so can feel a bit shallow I imagine. If he wants to win this "pissing contest" he'd better open up and stop throwing money in her face. By the way, I wonder if she will confront him about the idea that she is not the first woman that he has whisked away to Australia in recent years. *holds chin in thought* I'm sure that would make for a lively encounter, hehe. 

 

Inuyasha is really growing on me in this story.  He'd get a good smack for trashing my apartment, but then I'd just have to kiss him. I can;t wait to see what happens in the next chapter (Does she finally find out about the brothers? Does Inuyasha reveal his dreaded secret to her? Will the ever-hopeful Kouga make another appearance?). 

 

Love, love, loved that this chapter was so long. ^_^  Thanks for taking the time to write it for us. 



Author's Response:

Ah, ALWAYS love your reviews: you're always right on the mark about things.  Yes, Inuyasha knows Kagome a little better - money won't work with her.  Unfortunately for poor, emotionally scarred Sesshoumaru, it's the only way he knows that works with women.  Kagome hasn't yet realized that she's not the first woman to be brought to the lavish hotel; she's a bit naive.  Perhaps someone should let her know?  *evil smirk*  As for opening up...  Sesshoumaru is not that kind of creature.  If Kagome picks him in the end, there will be no recounts of love affairs.  Those are things he keeps to himself - that's how his mother taught him to be.

I always love writing for Inuyasha.  His brash language suits me (lol) and his mannerisms are easy to imagine.  But yeah, he's a bit of a pain in the ass.  I don't want to give away spoilers, but let's just say that things WILL come out in the next chapter (if the muses are good to me).  And YES, Kouga will be back.  Unfortunately, I'm awful at time-lines.  I've spent an entire week mapping out the dates of the story, and so many don't add up.  I apologize for that.  What many people don't remember is that Kouga went to the Olympics.  Oh, did I not mention that he left?  Naughty, naughty!  XD

Thanks so much for taking the time to review - it's a rare commodity here.  ^^

Reviewer: mnemosyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2008 3:25:22 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Vacation, Part Two

ah yay! I was so excited when I saw this had been updated!! I loved it. I'm very excited for the reunion of Inu and Kag, even though I loved the Australian vacay. Awesome job. I loved Inu's tat as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. You've really got me hooked :D

Author's Response:

If you're looking for some InuKag, you'll love the next chapter.  And if you like Inu's tattoo, perhaps you'll like the next chapter more!  ;)  Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! 

<3, PB

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