Inuyasha is so cute in this story. His insecurities are touching and I love him taking on that big guy while pretending to be human. I went to check out Kagome's apartment at the other site, and since I don't have an account there I thought I'd comment on that too over here. Very spacious! It was actually exactly how I pictured it, except that I had the kitchen and Nikki's old room reveresed (so that the bedrooms were next to eachother). Great job with both the drawing and the interlude/song fic. I'm generally not into song fics but you made it work and seem like a natural part of the story. Looking forward to more! 

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  You're the first person to NOT say "It's not how I imagined it at all..."  LOL  Thanks for going to check it out.  ^^  I'm so happy you liked the chapter!  I was afraid of what everyone would say, but I loved the idea and went for it.  Luckily, most people said exactly what you said - that although you normally don't like songfics, this one fit.  I'm not making it a habit, though.  It's a lot of work!  haha  Thanks again for reading and reviewing!  <3 PB