Reviews For A Gathered Storm
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Date: 03 Aug 2008 9:31:16 PM Title: The Swaggering Desperado
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 9:31:16 PM Title: The Swaggering Desperado
Your second chapter is amazing. You are very, very good at drawing in your audience! I'm going to read chapter 3 now.
I wonder why Kikyo has this power of Inuyasha? Or it just a power that he allows her to have? Hmm...
Anyway, this is great! I really don't see why you haven't got a hundred reviews telling you this..because this is wonderfully written.