[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2009 9:42:38 PM Title: The Chasm of Faith
Ohhh, please update, I know its been a year, but I stumbled onto your story, and I graciously have enjoyed it so far! Please update when you get the chance! :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2008 11:14:08 PM Title: The Chasm of Faith
Sesshoumaru is always the perceptive demon lord. So, Naraku wishes to resurrect a god... oh what a plot!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2008 3:01:30 PM Title: The Chasm of Faith
A dagger that can resurrect a god? Wow...talk about intense. I think it's really awesome that all this was insipired by music. That's really neat. So, how does this dagger connect to the light that Inuyasha and then other saw? Where will the cup fit in? I love your plot!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 11:31:17 PM Title: Illumination in Unnatural Light
This gets more intense with every chapter! I love it! So, Kikyo has the cup, Inuyasha and the others saw an eerie light, and Sesshomaru has entered the picture...
I wonder how it'll all play out in the chapters ahead? Can't wait to find out.
Also, I'd greatly appreciate a review from you on 'All Things Will Come' if you wouldn't mind. I'd really like to know your opinion.
10 again! (I have no idea if multiple 10's make a difference...) lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 11:21:59 PM Title: Visions Clash
This chapter was pretty intense. I can't understand why Kaede isn't trying to fight fate, but I suppose she knows that it wouldn't help...or maybe make things worse.
Strangely, as evil as Kikyo has become, I almost pity her. Almost.
Wonderful job, and another 10!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 9:54:29 PM Title: The Space Between
Yet another good chapter!
Keep writing 'em and I'll keep reading and reviewing them!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 9:52:00 PM Title: Mercury Morning
Kikyo sold her soul? Naraku has (sort of) joined forces with her, but he intends to use some form of blackmail...all this when Inuyasha and Kagome are FINALLY getting close??! Dude, you are cruel to your characters!!
Just kidding. I love your story!
Keep them chapters comin'!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 9:31:16 PM Title: The Swaggering Desperado
Your second chapter is amazing. You are very, very good at drawing in your audience! I'm going to read chapter 3 now.
I wonder why Kikyo has this power of Inuyasha? Or it just a power that he allows her to have? Hmm...
Anyway, this is great! I really don't see why you haven't got a hundred reviews telling you this..because this is wonderfully written.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2008 4:06:31 AM Title: Unfold Me
Love your first chapter. It's wonderfully written. You seem pretty in touch with your characters emotions and thats an admirable trait for a writer. I'll be reading/reviewing the rest probably tomorrow. In the meantime, you get a ten and permanent place in my Favs list.
Great work!