Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:29:46 PM Title: Perspective
oh wow this scene should have happened in the final act!!! grrrr oh well
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2008 10:27:32 PM Title: Perspective
If you wanted primitive you accomplished that task. But I loved it.
Date: 24 Sep 2008 5:50:26 PM Title: Perspective
Well, I thought the lemon could have been more detailed. I am a lover of citrus! I like to write them myself! And even though I often find it a bit difficult to write lemons, I do try to make them a bit more detailed, so as to suck the reader into the moment. It wasn't bad, just kinda short.
Date: 05 Aug 2008 3:31:30 PM Title: Perspective
I liked that sex scene.It was more passionate than others I've read.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. It was my first one, so I was kinda shy about putting it in. I was actually considering taking it out... So, I'm glad you liked it, because that means it's not as horrible as I thought it was. lol. Thanks again for reviewing and reading!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2008 1:19:37 AM Title: Perspective
It is still bad that he is deceiving them. However, it is good he is becoming friendly towards everyone and definitely affected by Kagome.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but he's confused. He isn't really sure what he feels, and he doesn't know what's okay to feel. I feel kinda bad for him. Thanks for reading! The 8th chapter should be up tonight.
Thanks very. very much. I appreciate your reviews, and that you're taking the time to read this.