Reviews For Breathless
Reviewer: Priestess Skye Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2007 10:12:52 AM Title: Breathless
Date: 24 Aug 2007 10:12:52 AM Title: Breathless
Oh I quite enjoyed this. Very hot, very nicely done and the way you worked in the lyrics worked very well.
Author's Response: I do try so hard. *wink* *grin*
Reviewer: Nile Signed 
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Date: 19 Aug 2007 12:00:06 AM Title: Breathless
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2007 12:00:06 AM Title: Breathless
Ooh! I like this! Very succinct and despite the lack of names, I already know who it is and my imagination just rolls along with the words.
Author's Response: Thank you very much this was my second attempt at a sex scene. It was written as a gift for a friend and also for practice for the next secne I will write for Kyoudai no Meiyo.rnrnAny and all encouragement or suggestions are welcomed graciously, I need the feedback as I want to write more in the future.rnrn~*Luce*~rn