[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 8:26:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great job once again ;) wow that was a nice twist you gave about her father, I didn't expect that, awesome :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope my readers would like it, I just hope that other readers like Valencia and don't think she's to strong, she's simply a tomboy. Thanks for your review :-)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:49:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wtf! You killed of Jakotsu >.< *sobs while clutching Jakotsu* great chapter though, kind of short though, but you left off in a suspenseful place -_- thanks for the cliffy
Author's Response: Yeah I know :( I killed him off kind of quickly lol I apologize, yeah it was short but it fits lol I'm sorry but I won't be able to update til about next Tuesday, I'm going on Vacation to Myrtle Beach :) I'll updat asap though.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:55:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! This chapter was worth the wait, I'm glad they're finally reunited and you have a great flow to this story! update or else -.-
Author's Response: Ha lol i will i promise and thank you for the compliment it means a lot too me :-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 11:08:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! ur a rlly gr8t writer!
Author's Response: Thanks its comments like these that make me want to continue writing
Date: 05 Jul 2011 7:53:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
wait so everyone thinks valencia is dead? So if Greed is so upset does that mean he loves her? 0.o
Author's Response: Well they don't know, right now she's lying low and she thinks Greed/Ling is dead, that was explained in the previous chapters and as for the second question, keep reading and you'll find out =) thanks for the review I hope you keep enjoying the story :-) and thanks soooo much for the idea you gave me =)
Date: 04 Jul 2011 8:52:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Whoa that was really good! Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks :) I hope you keep enjoying this story thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 4:00:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
me encanta tu cuento por favor continuar :)
Author's Response: Gracias, tengo a intención de continuar con mi cuento, gracias por las revisión
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:25:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
So Val is dead? wow didn't see that coming
Author's Response: Lol you'll have to find out in chapter seven =)
Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:57:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hate kimblee -_-
Author's Response: Lol I don't like him either ;) but he fits into the story so I wanted to use him :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:19:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
YAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!! Loved this chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next XD
Author's Response: Lol thanks I have big plans for this story I hope you continue to enjoy this tory
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:27:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm starting to really enjoy reading you're fanfiction :) Keep writing, this first chapter was really good, now I'm might just start watching the fullmetal alchemist :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I apologize for responding so late, Graduation process has just been pure chaos, I really enjoy the show maybe you would too, I wanted to do something different and I thought it would be cool if the other side of the gate was fuedal Japan. I ope you continue to enjoy my fanfiction just as much as I enjoy to write them:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:47:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS STORRRRY SOOOOO MUCHHH OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PREETTYYYY PLEASE CONTINUE I FRIGGIN LOVE THE FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol I plan on continueing this story, I love the Fullmetal Alchemist too, the second chapter should be up shortly