Reviews For Coma
Reviewer: SilentWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:42:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:42:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
AWWSAUCE!
Reviewer: sesshoumarusmistressofthewest Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 12:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: 07 Jan 2011 12:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the story so far but you may want to go back and fix this chapter and chapter 2 into smaller paragraphs it was hard to read all mushed together. Keep up the good work!