[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:23:40 PM Title: Return of an old enemy
write more please!!!!!!!! i really want to read the next chapter!!!!!!! really exiting :D
Author's Response:
Sorry I haven't undated yet, I lost my password and the new ones don't seem to work, but i'm going try to update some time this week.
And thanks for reviewing!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:08:45 PM Title: Return of an old enemy
i hope u will update again soon! i am writing my first fanfic too but your chapters are much longer than mine and that is a good thing! i really like this story and will continue to read it! :D
Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:34:18 AM Title: Return of an old enemy
wow... that is awesome... how will sesshomaru get out?
Author's Response: Thanks for for reviewing! you won't see sesshomaru for the next two chapters but he does return we're going to be geting into the main part of the story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:24:03 PM Title: Return of an old enemy
The dialogue was formatted better in chapter when compared to the first. You seem to have a decent idea for a story, but I would really like to see more detail. I don't have a very clear image of the setting or the custom characters, and it is hard to sympathize with a character you don't know all too well. However, I like it, and I would like to see chapter three when its up.
Author's Response: I know what you mean i'm not the best when it comes to details, but i'm going to try to add more detail in the next chapters