Reviews For To Enslave Demons
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Reviewer: RebelliousHanyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:43:25 AM Title: Demon of Misfortune

I think this is going to be one hell of a story :).  Just one thing, the chapters could be a bit longer, but other than that, not a flaw.  Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you and yes I agree, the chapters should be longer. The part one and two were originally meant to be one chapter; though, even together it's shorter than most of my chapters. Thank you again for the review.

~Mika

Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:51:32 PM Title: Demon of Misfortune

Great potential, I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Author's Response:

Thanks, it's been awhile since I've been on here a lot of school work is so crazy. I'll see about updating this story. Thank you for the review, it is very much appreciated.

Thank you,

~Mika~

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