Reviews For Gone
Reviewer: PitaBread Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2009 3:16:19 AM Title: Gone
Date: 21 Nov 2009 3:16:19 AM Title: Gone
This is great, but isn't 'closed' one syllable? If I'm wrong, then I'm sorry, but otherwise, that means there's only 4 syllables in that last line...
Reviewer: RebelliousHanyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2009 2:15:11 PM Title: Gone
Date: 20 Nov 2009 2:15:11 PM Title: Gone
Short, but very, very good (and sad). I love poetry, and this one was very well written. Keep it up!