Wow... I mean wow... It took me two weeks to actually finish all that you have written. And all I have to say is wow. I seriously began to doubt that there was no good fanfic's out there and that I've read the best, but I have to admit this is one of the best fics out there so far. I give it an A. Keep up the good work ^-^. The way you have the stories is fantastic. The way you had Shiro-sama's story and turned such a tale to fit Sesshomaru's clan was perfect. The back story of the dragon king even had me thinking about how evil is this man truly. One of those things that I can see how evil he was, but at the same time, he cared for his family both real and not. I actually stayed awak till one in the morning to finish the island arch you had. I cant wait to see what else you will come up with. 

If I had a question though, it would be what is your motivation for you to keep writing a good fanfic? What helps you keep the characters in character? I'm sure there's more questions, I just cant think of any. 

Well, sorry for the long review, but please, keep on writting. I await your next chapter. 

this last chapter was amazing of course cant wait for the next. just thought you'd like to know :)