Reviews For The Void
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Reviewer: dragonscloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 9:16:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Always wondered why Miroku's Father and Grnadfather did not cut off their hand/arm when they knew the windtunnel was about to go out of control

Author's Response: Same here lol. And just fyi, the sequel is complete on my other sites; https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7140022/1/The-Void-Journey-to-Redemption or http://www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/5914/1 Just never got around to finishing it on this site.

Reviewer: Adelaide Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:32:51 AM Title: Epilogue

This story was great! And I have been thinking about what you said about a title for the sequel. If you are still planning on writing it, I have an idea. How about something to the effect of "Filling the Void" or "To Fill the Void"   Just my thoughts!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2009 3:09:45 AM Title: Epilogue

Awesome... I hope you do not mind, but I am going to edit your chapter 18 to be this chapter as we do not allow author notes as a chapter holder. Things happen in life and people know. If they do not, they must be living under a rock...lol.

I am eager for the sequel!

Author's Response: Ty for you reviews and no I do not mind you changing it.  In fact you pointing out that there was a problem made me realize I had screwed up.  I think I posted just the AN but forgot to post the chapter itself.  It should be fixed how if you want to go back and reread chapter 18, that's the new one.  The old chapter 18 is now set as Epilogue as it should be. :)

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2009 12:08:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

I almost feel sorry for Kagome. She is really lonely.

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Date: 13 Sep 2009 4:51:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

Very sad that Kagome's family had passed on the other side of the well. It is a lot and she just keeps trekking on.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:56:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

How sad for Kagome.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:51:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

It is good that InuYasha can get through the well to at least inform Kagome's mother of the situation.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:46:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

That does make sense with the Noh's Mask.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:42:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

Perhaps she should not have said anything. I can see her kind of already setting herself up at failure for trying to fool herself.

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:34:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Quite interesting the effect on both of them within the void. Will they truly be able to remain apart outside the void if they get out?

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:30:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

That is sad that Miroku would want to die.

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Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:28:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoa! Surprised Kagome has not pulled the "Whoa! Hold the phone!"

lol

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:23:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well Sesshoumaru is such a sour puss...lol

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:19:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow... so it is truly a void!

Reviewer: Taiyoukai_Nile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 2:15:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting how InuYasha takes action and cuts off Miroku's arm. However... that poses the mother of all questions: Is Miroku's wind tunnel a void, or where does it lead to?

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