Date: 26 Dec 2008 9:04:56 AM Title: XI
Wow!!! I really love the Romeo and Juliet spin you added to it. It really does help put a scope to everything. I just really hope that Inu doesnt get really hurt in the end. And yes that was an evil cliffy. I was also wondering if Sess was in the woods b4 inu kissed Kags. Anyway, best Christmas present ever, seeing that this was updated. Keep up the great work, I absolutely love this story!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much! I know a lot of my readers won't get it, because they're usually forsed to read Romeo and Juliet, but I love that story (I'm a sucker for angst) and it immediately came to mind when writing this chapter and I worked it in. *sigh* Unfortunately, Inuyasha is going to get hurt, but not how you think. You're all going to hate me... *cries*
As for your question, It will be answered very soon. I'm posting the next chapter tomorrow, most likely. I've been working like a demon on this story, lol. Thanks so much! I'm glad you're still with me!
Date: 25 Dec 2008 11:01:36 PM Title: XI
no inukag lemon...pretty pretty please :'(
Author's Response:
...
I'm sorry, but pretty much everyone wants it. But I promise I'll mark it, so that when you read that chapter, you can skip it. I hope that sounds fair...
Date: 25 Dec 2008 9:11:48 PM Title: I
keep doing what you do your a good author, you make the crowd go threw a lot of emotions. like the other people that reviewed to.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
Date: 25 Dec 2008 9:08:27 PM Title: I
awww *cries* i thought sesshoumaru and kagome was going to get back together in the next chapter. this is a major disappointment.
Author's Response: Not yet, sorry. They both have some stuff to go through. Kagome has some more growing to do, and Sesshoumaru has to suffer still. I'm sorry! It's going to be a while...
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2008 3:02:48 AM Title: X
wow have been crying for the past 3 chaps will Kags be ok who was the Visitor was if Ses whats going on hope there is an update soon
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're crying!
Oh, Kagome will be fine, for now. You'll see in the next chapter, which I think I'm updating tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2008 9:59:31 PM Title: X
Will she get better after all that. Bleach? Why did Kagome's mom need to use so much?
Author's Response:
Little by little, sure.
Haha, to cover up the scent. *smirk*
Date: 16 Dec 2008 7:40:59 PM Title: I
i hope sesshoumaru realizes he's feeling's for her.
Author's Response: Oh, he will. Don't worry, he will.
Date: 16 Dec 2008 7:39:14 PM Title: X
wow this is a sad story, i thought sure sesshoumaru was going to be the one kagome would be with.
Author's Response: They will be together eventually. But this is an angsty story, and they've all got some pain to go through before Sesshoumaru and Kagome can be together again.
Date: 16 Dec 2008 8:58:05 AM Title: X
Wow! That was amazing how you wrote everyones pain so perfectly. Reading about what Kags was feeling made me want to cry. And I am loving the confusion that Sess is feeling, like he knew that he did something wrong, but is too stubborn to fix it. I am so happy that Rin is engaged to Kohaku, at least she found happiness in light of everything that has happened. Poor Inu, he is being such a good friend right now, I hope he doesnt end up with a broken heart again. And i really cant wait to see how our two stubborn lovers find a way to fix this. Thanks for the update, I really love this story. You really do a great job of bringing the characters to life and emphasizing their emotions. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: What a great review! Wow, thanks so much! I'm actually beaming right now - really! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. This is my favorite of my stories (although I may be a little biased, since it's SessKag, lol) so even though it's not my most popular story, my reviews are so much more thorough for this one. Sess is going to be going through some more stuff until he can even think about fixing anything, since right now, he doesn't particularly want to fix anything. Everybody else (except Inu and Kag) are just dandy, and in their village, they're shiny, happy people. And don't worry about Inuyasha, I've got a whole 'nother outcome for him that you guys will be blindsided by! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2008 11:26:21 PM Title: I
this is a good story please continue, i hope sesshoumaru realizes what he has done and go back to kagome. poor kagome! T_T i hope they get back together again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ah, if only Sesshoumaru was capable of such a thing. No, first, he has to suffer. And suffer some more. But you'll see, eventually.
Date: 07 Dec 2008 12:05:31 AM Title: IX
o my god u have to update soon! will he snap out of it? grrrrrrrrrrrrrr UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response:
You're not the only one yelling at me, lol. Let's just say that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are both a little stubborn, ok? And don't worry, I'm actually working on the next chapter now. I took a break to read some inspiring fanfiction, and I'll have the next chapter out soon. ^^
And thanks for the dokuga recommendation - I went ahead and got in, as well as submitted this story!
Date: 06 Dec 2008 1:13:39 AM Title: I
hey random question: do you know dokuga.com? I haven't seen this story there, but I think it'd be pretty popular ! ((dokuga.com is a sess/kag fansite))
*^_^* I love this story
Author's Response:
I've heard of it - I know it's pretty popular! But I hadn't gone there because I WAS posting at A Single Spark, until they closed it. Maybe I'll give dokuga a try! Thanks!
And thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^^
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2008 11:47:30 PM Title: I
Why would I miss a story like this? :) I have been enjoying it. I have been really busy, but I try to find the time to read as many fanfics here as I can.
Author's Response: I know the feeling! Thanks for the support. :]
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2008 3:09:40 AM Title: IX
OH my, what a surprising turn. How will Kagome be able to deal with it?
Author's Response:
Not well. :]
I didn't know you were reading this story, Nile. Thanks!
Date: 04 Dec 2008 11:46:01 PM Title: I
Thank you so much for updating, but man that is a major cliffy! No hatred here, it is angst after all, but i so didnt expect that curve ball you threw. Is Sess becoming more primal? How are all of Kags friends going to respond to this new development? I have tons of more questions, so you really need to update this one soon, if only for the sake of my sanity! :) I did love the plot twist though, definately making the story dig even deeper into the psyche of Sesshomaru than you were before. I cant wait to read more on this. Congrats on the great story. Poor Rin, I hope that this doesnt forever tarnish the image of her idol/adopted father. But she is such a sweet girl, she will eventually forgive him. At least it gives her an excuse to spend more time with Kohaku im assuming. Anyway, hope to see more soon, and thanks again for the update.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you appreciate what I'm doing with Sesshoumaru! So many people kept calling him OOC - which was true - but wasn't it obvious that he was becoming more like himself with every memory? Well, he certainly is back to the old Sesshoumaru.
I'm actually going to delve into Kagome's character from now on. We won't see much of Sesshoumaru for a while, and I've got more surprises in store. As for Rin... Well, I don't want to ruin anything. And as for Kagome's friends... well, you'll see.
I've been DYING to get to this chapter - it's really where the *fun* starts (not for the characters, but for me, lol). I hope you like it too. ^^ I'm going to try to get the next one out quickly, but as I have my other story... But I don't think it'll ever take this long again. Thanks for being so patient!
-PB
Date: 22 Oct 2008 1:24:52 PM Title: VIII
Please update! I love how this story keeps everyone true to their characters while allowing them to mature and change as would happen when time goes by. And I love how Sess is showing his vulnerability beneath the mask.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm actually working on the next chapter now. I was on a roll with my other story, so I set this one aside momentarily. It may take me a week or so, but I'm working on chapter 9 and should have it out as soon as possible. ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying the characterizations - I take pride in keeping my writing as close to canon as possible. Ah... As for Sesshoumaru... you may hate me after the next chapter, but stick around, I promise you won't be disappointed in the end!
<3 PB
Date: 15 Sep 2008 4:42:19 PM Title: VIII
Excellent! I was so happy when I saw that this was updated. I am really enjoying this story so far. I love the relationship you are developing with Rin and Kohaku, and it was so endearing to see Sango and her brother reunited.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! <3 I'm glad you like it - it doesn't get much attention, so I'm happy to see that someone's enjoying it, lol. There will be a little more Kohaku/Rin, but to be honest, this story is about to live up to its' category of <i>angst</i>.
Date: 21 Jul 2008 11:38:30 AM Title: VII
So KAWAIII!!!!!
Author's Response: ^_^ Thanks!!! <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2008 2:34:50 PM Title: VII
This was absolutely amazing. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it! ^^ I'm so sorry about how long it took, but I was having problems submitting here. It's fixed now, and hopefully I can update soon!
Date: 03 Jul 2008 4:17:40 PM Title: VII
Yay! You started writing again! I love yuor style, and this story sure is an interesting one. I look forward to mroe updates to se where everything goes. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^^ Actually, I had had a problem submitting here, and I had put this chapter up at my other sites over a month ago. So if you even don't hear from me for a long time, ask - you never know. :) Luckily, I figured out the problem with a little help, and now I have updated. Soon, I can update my other story, too. ^^ Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! -PB
Date: 04 Jun 2008 12:12:34 AM Title: I
I had read this earlier 9and favorited) but had not had a chance to come back and leave a note. I really enjoyed this so far and look forward to more updates. Amnesia Seeshoumaru is so sweet and fluffy :D
Author's Response: : D I agree. I love this Sesshoumaru as well. But I really love him most as his usual self. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! ^_^
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2008 7:13:58 PM Title: VI
Ahmayzang!I loved it, more soon.
Author's Response: Hopefully! XD
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2008 2:11:58 PM Title: VI
nice long chappie yey well i liked it
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next one will be up soon! :D
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2008 1:30:52 AM Title: I
Oooo... I totally love it! More soon?
Author's Response: Soon!!!! I'm working on it, but I have a contest submission I need to get in first!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2008 8:27:48 PM Title: III
well now he says something gosh inuyasha is so dumb he doesn't even know kagome is with some other man and is falling in love well i like it good plot kepp writting