Date: 04 Jan 2009 11:24:43 AM Title: XIII
Wow! Sess is difinately an idiot, bit at least he has finally come around, even if he is too late in the feudal era, I hope that he makes his move in the present. And now I really fell sorry for Inu. He turned human for her, and she just married him out of guilt. Poor guy. Anyway, I love this story no matter what you do with it, with the exception of killing off the major players of course, and I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Well, the whole point was to get Sesshoumaru into her time. Now that that has been accompished, I have some fleshing out of the story to do, and then we'll see what happens.
Er, yeah. About that... don't hate me later. Please. lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2009 3:56:17 AM Title: XIII
I agree with what you said about the castle thing but in the manga his mother did have a castle and would seem that family and heritage in japan being what it is they would pass it from one to another or at least he would have a place to go believe it is the part of the manga that he and kohaku go to hell to save rin they go to his mother's to ask her advice on how to save her.
love the story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Yeah, I remember the castle she had, but I don't think Sesshoumaru wants any part of it. It seems that she enjoys the finer things in life, and so she has adapted to the lifestyle. Sesshoumaru seems to be happier traipsing around the wilderness, lol. Of course, in the future, he'll need money and a place to live, but that will all come in time.
Thanks so much! I appreciate you reading the notes I write - sometimes I need to say something important, and I feel like only 10% of you are reading it, haha. And worry not, the next chapter's already done - just keeping it around til I get chapter 15 done with.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2009 3:01:52 AM Title: XIII
I did not expect InuYasha to wish to be human. That is not what Kagome would have wanted. And in the end it closed them from the Feudal era.
Now what? The suspense is tearing me apart!
Author's Response:
Realistically, I don't think he would have wanted it. But in my story, it makes sense, since he doesn't want to remind Kagome of Sesshoumaru. He just wants to be Inuyasha. But there's another purpose to this, and it'll be more clear later. I just can't give anything away so soon.
The next chapter's ready, so you won't have to wait long. I'm just going to do a little of chapter 15 first.