[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2009 12:11:10 PM Title: Wanted
Once again, great chapter. I think it was a great show for Inuyasha to switch places and be the one taking care of Kagome. Anyways, til' next time.
~Mika
Date: 20 Jun 2009 9:48:30 PM Title: Wanted
You'll be missed, but have fun. I still can't wait for Inuyasha to learn the right reasons to stop drinking. Also I was a little disapointed in Miroku for picking on Inuyasha a little bit when he called about the assignment. Oh well, Inuyasha can't completely reform his image that he's built the past 8 years overnight. I also really liked the way that you made it so Kanna has no aura or scent although to me it's still a little weird to think of her as an adult and married.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2009 11:26:48 PM Title: Wanted
Uh oh, things don't look so good with Naraku reeking up havoc! Maybe Kagura will betray him. ;) Just wishing. Story is going smoothly, and I'm sorry you won't be updating in a week, but maybe you can think of your ideas on the plane, and write them down and then type them up! ;) Just suggesting! :) I love to draw and already I'm making a dedication to one of my good friend and her story, since I love this story so much, I'm also making it for this story! :)
*Heres my idea: InuYasha and Kagome are in the main frame, since the title is called Guilty Hero, InuYasha's head is a close-up, and yes he's smoking, describing his problems, and is looking down, his face shows sorrow, and Kagome is looking at him, her eyes saying she want to help. In InuYasha's head, it shows InuYasha shooting Kikyo in the battle which costs him his loss.*
If you don't want me to do it then just tell me! :) I just love this story so much! XD Update when you get back! And enjoy your trip! :D
Author's Response: My lips must remain sealed concerning Naraku and his plans. But it should be good. ^__^ Anyways, I will actually be in a car, not on a plane, for six lovely hours (I love road trips), but I'll try and write when I can. I am bringing dramamine in preparation. Now, as for your drawing idea--I love it! I keep forgetting to put in an author's note that I would love for someone to do some artwork for GH. I tried myself, but it's been so long since I picked up a pencil to draw... I need to practice, let's just say that. I used to be good, but I switched my focus to writing instead. But, I digress. Please do the drawing. I would love to see it.