[Report This]Date: 27 May 2009 1:43:02 AM Title: Time Isn't Healing This...
A very good start. I am very thrilled to see this take on an AU type InuYasha. :)
Date: 22 May 2009 4:16:07 AM Title: Time Isn't Healing This...
I like this, it's definately a new twist and you managed to get rid of Kikyo and Naraku before the story even really takes off which I think is a good thing. I can't wait to read more and to see how you have Miroku and Sango try to get Inuyasha out of his funk.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the compliment--an author always loves to hear that they've done something new to stories that have been told countless times before. ^__^ Stay tuned, another chapter should be coming up shortly. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2009 12:01:17 AM Title: Time Isn't Healing This...
I got only one word to say...wow. I'm very impressed, and can not wait for the next update! I wonder what that miracle is...? ;)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it! Not to worry, the next update should be quick in coming, seeing as how it is already written. ^__^ And, while you may already know what that miracle is, I'm afraid to say it won't arrive until chapter 4. I hope you can hold out until then!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2009 10:53:43 PM Title: Time Isn't Healing This...
This is off to a great start! I really like it, and I intend to keep up with its progress. However, you asked for contructive criticism, so here it goes: I think the bit about Inuyasha's past with Kikyo could have been longer and more detailed...instead of briefly summerized, especially if it is important to the story.
Other than that, its great! Wonderful job on your first AU fic, you're off to a great start!
Author's Response:
Goodness, I never expected to get a review so quickly! This is quite nice. Hopefully, you won't be disappointed with how the story plays out. I'm very glad you have such faith in it. And thank you for the criticism, as I always like the opportunity to improve my work. I do understand what you mean about it being rather short, and I would like to eventually go back and edit the earlier chapters. However, I am past the half way point in writing it out, and am focusing more on that than edits. Perhaps, once it is finished I can go back. Still, Inu-Yasha's past will be more fully explained as the story progresses.
Thanks very much for the review!