Date: 09 Feb 2010 4:49:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
could you please update it's been a while don't ya think? not updating is how you loose alot of your readers like the ones before me so please update
Date: 24 Jul 2009 7:39:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I guess this is going to be a one chapter tease, so I'm removing it from my fav list.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2009 10:34:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I normally don't read stories with only one or a few chapters wrote since so many are abandoned even if they do have a good start like yours. It's been 3 months since this first chapter. Are you going to return and continue this fresh, new idea for a story or will you join the ranks of a 'fly-by-nite' writer. So far it seems you have by letting the story get this old with no update. Sorry to sound harsh, but you show a good imagination and a talented writing style that I would like to continue enjoying reading.
Date: 14 Jun 2009 9:46:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
u gonna finish this?
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2009 3:57:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm lloking forward to reading the rest of this! Congrats on being featured!