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Reviewer: Angel415 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2009 6:35:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you will continue to post the other chapters! :) Its a really really good story! :)

Author's Response: Oh I will I promise!! :) You have nothing to worry about on that front! :)

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2009 9:31:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

Whoa, whoa, back up. -_- You KILLED Sesshomaru!? Gahhhh! I'm not a over excessively Sesshy lover, but you can't kill him! :`( Oh boy, this is going to be interesting. So InuYasha is next in line? I hope so!

*You might want to warn people about the character death* ;)



Author's Response: Oops I thought I did. I'll fix it right now! :)

As of now Inuyasha's next in line. It all depends on what he wants though :)

Reviewer: Koga4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2009 7:31:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Kehehe! This has some of the best Fluffy stories on it! (I'm kinda scared though, most people on here are Sessh lovers and being the only Koga lover I've found...I'm afraid I'm gonna get mauled or something...>.<)

Author's Response:

LOL Don't feel bad! Be true to yourself! Don't hide in the shadows! Make yourself known girl! :)

Reviewer: Koga4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2009 4:20:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lolz! I found you!

Author's Response: LOL!! I see you!! What are you doing here? I didn't know you had an account here! :) LOL

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2009 12:36:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh man you were right InuYasha was pissed! Lol! :) Well, I wasn't expecting that from your OC Fiji, but it makes InuYasha go and defend his pup! This time, unlucky for Fiji, InuYasha's a hanyou. I wonder what wll happen? :) I'll be looking for the next update!

Author's Response: Yep! Inuyasha was FURIOUS!! :) I always thought that unless it was an AU story Inuyasha would be an overly protective, but great father. As for Fiji, I wasn't going to do that with his character, but I WAS going to have Ayako attacked. I decided on Fiji when someone mentioned in passing in a review on another website if Fiji wasn't as good a guy as he first appeared. So it got me thinking and I thought it would be a good idea. I didn't think anyone would see it coming lol :) I hope you enjoy tomorrows update!! :)

Reviewer: Angel415 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2009 9:32:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Add the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: LOL oksy! Give me two minutes!

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2009 11:25:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

*Blushes in embarrassment* I meant to say InuYasha's and Miroku's children! Gahh! Sounded like InuYasha and Miroku HAD a child the way I said it! LOL! Sigh... hope I didn't scare you there! I'll look for the next chapter tomorrow! :)

Author's Response: LOL! No you didn't scare me and I knew what you meant. :) LOL I'll post the next chapter in the morning! :)

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2009 9:02:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ummmm...not quite what I was picturing. I mean InuYasha's and Miroku's child!? LOL! I have to say you have a very loose mind to do something like that! :) Ohter wise I'm glad you brought Kouga back, he was not bad just confused. I wasn't expecting to two to connect like that truthfully, but its still okay all the same! :)

_InuYasha and Miroku are going to kill them! :)_



Author's Response: LOL I'm crazy I know. But I thought they'd make a cute couple. Koga has some other reasons why he's hunting humans which will come to light later. :) And yeah Inuyasha is going to be pretty pissed.

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2009 10:43:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

gah! i wish Ses would pull that stick out of his ass about his kin sheesh Inu has proven worthy of his father's blood and if he didn't want them to further taint it he should have said so freakin grumble grumble

 

love the story



Author's Response: LOL Amen amen!! I agree. Inuyasha is more worthy of their fathers blood than Sesshomaru is in my opinion. But that's just me :) Seriously Sesshie! Get over it already!

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2009 11:10:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Kouga, he's not all that bad! :) Well I'm glad you brought InuYasha and Kagome into their adventures, and I hope Ayako runs into Sesshoumaru soon, so she can show him a thing or too! ;)

Author's Response: Inuyasha and Kagome WILL be back again! :) I promise you that. Hopefully you'll enjoy what I have planned with Ayako and Sesshomaru, though you may not. But I won't ruin it for ya! :)

Reviewer: sango Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2009 10:33:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

please continue, this is a really good story. i love it.

Author's Response: Of course I'll continue! :) This will definitely be a long story though so I hope you'll read the whole thing through!

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2009 9:30:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

sighs ,,, this is gonna get ugly i can just tell but it will be so sweet to read thanks for writting

Author's Response: LOL Are my plotlines that obvious? LOL :) I have plans for Koga! ::Rubs hands together with evil glee:: I'm not the best action writer, but I've done my best! :) Hopefully the Koga thing came out good :)

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2009 9:18:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

freakin Koga what the hell turning back into an ass like that grrrrr

Author's Response: Awe I'm sorry! :( I guess your a Koga lover? You might not like what I have planned for him soon, but I urge you to keep reading. He's got his reasons for hunting humans. But I won't ruin it for you. He will still be an ass, but I feel sorry for him in a way. Anyways I hope you'll still keep reading :)

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2009 7:47:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

You did well writing the action! Ummm...well I thought InuYasha and Kagome was going to join them, InuYasha is my favorite character, are we going back to them? I know it's his daughter, but please don't leave InuYasha and Kagome out! Thats why I got so into APSGC! :)  

Author's Response: Don't worry Kagome and Inuyasha WILL be back I promise! :) There will be more Inu/Kag lemons too. This story mostly focuses on Ayako and there will be a lot of review chapters of the last two stories. But they WILL be back. Trust me I couldn't leave them out of the story completely. Inuyasha is my favorite character too. And I'm a die hard Inu/Kags fan. And thanks for saying I did well with the action! I was so worried I'd screw it up! It's definitely not my strength, I'll say that much! :) Anyways I hope you continue to read this story even though it's mostly about Ayako. :)

Reviewer: mysteriousj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2009 1:22:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

WOW!!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :) I'm not very good at writing action, but I gave it my best shot!

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2009 8:08:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good, good. Sometimes I'm getting confused with all the names! But hey, thats not your fault! I have to figure them out myself! I wonder if Ayako runs into InuYasha's older enemies, to bad Naraku's dead, it would be funny to have her fight him! Poor InuYasha, had to have his fangs ripped out to give all three of his children swords! Teehee!

_I hope Ayako kicks Sesshomaru's butt!_ ;)



Author's Response:

I hope so too! :) I'm guess it's easy to get confused with the names. As stated in APSGC her name Ayako means pretty child. Chiyoko means child of a thousand generations. And Chio I just made up. lol :)

Remember what it was like when he had to fix Tetsusaiga? He screamed like a baby! Poor Inuyasha... But I think he's matured enough not to scream. Ahhh the wonders of novicane!

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2009 1:58:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow i wonder what Sesshomaru's reaction will be when he meets her

Author's Response: I debated on what his reaction would be. I finally decided on what it would be, but I won't ruin the story for ya! :) teehee!

Reviewer: InuYashaReader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2009 5:03:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

As always, InuYasha is very protective! :) Have you not noticed when someone gives Kagome and InuYasha a kid, it's almost always a girl? Not that its a bad thing! I was thinking about it too, giving InuYasha and Kagome a kid, and guess what, it was going to be a girl! You probably the only one I see that gave them a son. Well it starts out well, can't wait to read more!  -InuYashaReader  :)

Author's Response: I almost always give them girls too, but sometimes I throw a boy in there. And yeah I've noticed they always have girls. I don't know why everyone gives them girls. I just personally always envision them with daughters. Inuyasha will always be his protective self lol. And you should definitely give Inuyasha and Kagome a child! I always think Inuyasha would make a great father and Kagome an awesome mother. :) You should definitely give them a daughter! Make it look like Inuyasha! :) Teehee!

Reviewer: lillianruno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2009 2:22:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

lol yasha as a dad oof a teen oh how i would love to see something about his dad rolling around laughing great story

Author's Response: LOL :) Glad you're enjoying it! I think Inuyasha would make a great father, but the teen years are hard on all parents. Poor Inuyasha...

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