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Reviewer: Aphroelle Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2009 11:33:49 PM Title: The Asset

i like where it going, but i really dislike the mate. Plus i like how our girl Kagome proves her worth to mean old sessy.

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Date: 24 Oct 2009 11:27:38 PM Title: The Dream

Wowaha. I don't know what to say. The dreams are an awsome idea, they throw readers off and helps build the plot. the the creation of your own chararter is a huge point in my book. She will be an exalent tool later in the story. I like the deep moral ideas of Kags in your story but it my seen KIND-OF clique, to protect Inu. But it also helps to show her kindness and love of childen, even if it is Sessy's. Love it. Good Luck

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