if i might make a suggestion as to where you should take it and this is coming from where i see is going is you switching it over to sesshoumaru run and have him thinking somethings like ill kill who ever has taken my son and upset my mate or something like that and while hes thinking that like have inu-no come in and have him really pissed off to and there both like growling and eyes starting to turn red and then like have them come up on kouga to add a twist and have him like saying he smelt kyo and a different sent come threw this way and then all then have inuyasha come up on the scene there like trying to kill kouga and accuseing him of taking kyo and stuff until like a mysterious voice like outta no where says he has kyo and like have sesshoumaru and inu-no both like say come out now and bring back the kid and have like somebody step out that nobody whould have suspected it would have been and then like have inuyasha say the person name and then like cut it off till the next chapter but thats just my idea you can use it or some parts of it if you like but i was just throwing that your way

Author's Response:

All except for the 'likes' I like that idea!  Thank you for the help in trying to figure out where it's going.  I know exactly what I'm going to do.  XD 

~TH~ 

loved it great job!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  You're my first Reveir too, which makes it all the more special!  XD!  Peace out.

~TH~